Christina8

With You--Pt.2

With you, I want to dance in the dark,

    Rekindle that special spark

    Remember when we first met

    Watch a breathtaking sunset

 

With you, I want you to know my love

    To tell you what I dream of

    To let you know what you mean to me

    And then let you love me eagerly

 

With you, I wanna watch the stars

    Down here, from afar

    Watch the clear night sky

    In your arms I feel I could fly

 

With you, anywhere is home

    Whether right here or in Rome

    But I just need you to know

   My love will follow you wherever you go

Comments9

  • Goldfinch60

    Very good loving write.

    • Christina8

      Thanks GF, I appreciate it!

    • Laura

      This is absolutely beautiful! So loving and tender! We should all be so fortunate and have a mate/husband/significant other as you do! It warmed my heart! I'm so glad I discovered this site! Looking forward to more of your writings!
      ~Laura~

      • Christina8

        Well, I write everyday! lol Glad I posted it then. I appreciate your wonderful compliments! Thanks for the favorite save!

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        "When you are in LOVE ~ The whole World sings a melody ~ When you are in LOVE ~ who cares if raindrops fall ~ Sky above is brighter BLUE ~ Earth beneath is sweeter GREEN ~ Something gleams in every hue ~ Unloved eyes have NEVER seen !" Those of us who are experiencing TRUE LOVE can empathise with every word you we all share in your happiness and effusive love ! Part THREE please ! Your love is PERFECT and it is rubbing off on all of us ! Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN ~ @@@@@@@

        • Christina8

          OK Brian, LOL, my poem seems to have affected you!! I appreciate your wonderful compliments and your wonderful reply. Awesome! Sisterly hugs--Christina

        • FredPeyer

          Christina, this is a poem I want to read to my wife! Perfectly incredible! Thanks for posting.

          • Christina8

            Well, thats a reaction I've never gotten before, but thank you so much for that incredible compliment!! Thank you so much!!

          • orchidee

            A fine write Christina.

            • Christina8

              Thanks so much orchidee!

            • ron parrish aka wordman

              true love forever,not a moment to waste,now and forever in my special place

              • Christina8

                Yes, true love forever! Thanks for leaving such a wonderful reply. Appreciated!

              • Poetic Dan

                To read your passion file up my heart to feel it must bring such warmth. Great write and a lucky man he is too ;)

                • Christina8

                  Thank you so much Poetic Dan! I appreciate your kind words and compliment!

                • Simple-Man87

                  "in your arms I feel I can fly."

                  That was a wonderful line. How lucky is this man, to have a woman with such beauty.

                  • Christina8

                    Hey, I haven't even posted my picture yet! LOL But I know you mean inner beauty. And I certainly do appreciate the read and the comment!!

                  • Neville

                    another little cracker if ever there was... some one some where is a very lucky guy I reckon...... N

                    • Christina8

                      This is the one that I think I my best. I'm glad you like it too!!! Thanks so much for the read!...>C

                      • Neville

                        you are more than welcome....



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