With you, I want to dance in the dark,
Rekindle that special spark
Remember when we first met
Watch a breathtaking sunset
With you, I want you to know my love
To tell you what I dream of
To let you know what you mean to me
And then let you love me eagerly
With you, I wanna watch the stars
Down here, from afar
Watch the clear night sky
In your arms I feel I could fly
With you, anywhere is home
Whether right here or in Rome
But I just need you to know
My love will follow you wherever you go
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 15th, 2017 00:21
- Comment from author about the poem: Listening to Ed Sheerans song \\\"Perfect\\\". Used his line \\\"dancing in the dark\\\" for my first line
- Category: Love
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Comments9
Very good loving write.
Thanks GF, I appreciate it!
This is absolutely beautiful! So loving and tender! We should all be so fortunate and have a mate/husband/significant other as you do! It warmed my heart! I'm so glad I discovered this site! Looking forward to more of your writings!
~Laura~
Well, I write everyday! lol Glad I posted it then. I appreciate your wonderful compliments! Thanks for the favorite save!
"When you are in LOVE ~ The whole World sings a melody ~ When you are in LOVE ~ who cares if raindrops fall ~ Sky above is brighter BLUE ~ Earth beneath is sweeter GREEN ~ Something gleams in every hue ~ Unloved eyes have NEVER seen !" Those of us who are experiencing TRUE LOVE can empathise with every word you we all share in your happiness and effusive love ! Part THREE please ! Your love is PERFECT and it is rubbing off on all of us ! Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN ~ @@@@@@@
OK Brian, LOL, my poem seems to have affected you!! I appreciate your wonderful compliments and your wonderful reply. Awesome! Sisterly hugs--Christina
Christina, this is a poem I want to read to my wife! Perfectly incredible! Thanks for posting.
Well, thats a reaction I've never gotten before, but thank you so much for that incredible compliment!! Thank you so much!!
A fine write Christina.
Thanks so much orchidee!
true love forever,not a moment to waste,now and forever in my special place
Yes, true love forever! Thanks for leaving such a wonderful reply. Appreciated!
To read your passion file up my heart to feel it must bring such warmth. Great write and a lucky man he is too 😉
Thank you so much Poetic Dan! I appreciate your kind words and compliment!
"in your arms I feel I can fly."
That was a wonderful line. How lucky is this man, to have a woman with such beauty.
Hey, I haven't even posted my picture yet! LOL But I know you mean inner beauty. And I certainly do appreciate the read and the comment!!
another little cracker if ever there was... some one some where is a very lucky guy I reckon...... N
This is the one that I think I my best. I'm glad you like it too!!! Thanks so much for the read!...>C
you are more than welcome....
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