As I climb this steep hill...
I remember the time you held my hand
I remember the time you wiped my tears
I remember the time you carried me on your shoulders.
I Finally made it to the top of this hill...
What a view to behold
I see your beloved willow tree but
I don’t see you.
All I see is a big grey stone...
The wind is blowing in my ear
I hear your voice
It’s calling me.
It’s telling me you’re okay...
Everything is just fine
Oh how I miss you my love
R.I.P. my beloved DAD!
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Author:
Laura🌻 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: My dad’s anniversary. ✝️
- Category: Family
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How beautiful Laura. What a wonderful tribute to your Dad! I'm sure he loves it too! Great poem!
Thank you Christina! Your comment is very much appreciated! He was a great man!
Yes good heartfelt writing . I so relate 😎
Thank you WL! Your read and comment is very much appreciated!
Very good heartfelt write and tribute to your Dad, I feel the same way about my Dad as well.
Thank you Goldfinch! He deserves much more than this tribute for all the sacrifices he made for his family! Obviously you can relate! I appreciate your read and comments!
A thoughtful and sensitive write Laura.
Thank you Orchi! I appreciate your comments! Today has been a very difficult day!
beautiful sentiment
Thank you Ron!
my pleasure
Thank you Santi 🙏🏻
Many of us can relate to this beautiful piece - it made my eyes water. I seem to miss my Dad even more as I get older.
Yes, I miss him every single day! Sometimes I think I see him in a doorway, in a room, or following me.
Thank you Michael for your visit and your comments! Very much appreciated!
~Laura ~
How did I miss this beautiful tribute to your dad. I've a poem you may relate to, "This Is not Good-bye". Check it out if you wish. Great write here Laura.
I will check it out!
Thank you for your read, your comments and the save!
Very much appreciated!
Your tender words and beautiful sentiments make a father much loved and missed even more special - welcome to MPS dear Laura - I look forward to reading more of your work.
Thank you, Fay!
So sad! I lost my dad too so poems like these always get me
Thank you Luke. I appreciate your comment!
Love your beautiful poems and words so good
Thank you Joseph !
I love this! I look forward to more of your artistic work.
~HC
You’re welcome!
I’m sorry for YOUR loss! May they Rest In Peace! I miss my dad so much as I’m sure you miss your mom!
Thank you for your lovely comments!
Beautifully done, I shed a tear to the love of my children. I'm glad to read and feel what a great relationship can build, thanks for inspiring me more.
beautiful grief cherished in this lovely poem. I trust that you found a level of comfort in writing this.
Yes, I did!
Thank you for the
read and kind words!
I sincerely appreciate
your visit!
~Laura~
Laura - I just found this one..... sitting waiting for a snowstorm today with not much to do.......... and it's beautiful. Odd too because my Dad had planted a willow tree at one of the homes we lived in when I was young...... it's still there a full grown and older tree now! Maybe we are ancestorily related!
I think you are! And both Awesomely amazing!
There you go, Lorna!
Maybe we are!! 😊
Thank you for your
visit and commenting!
I hope the snowstorm
won’t be too harsh for
you! Take good care!
~Laura~
these words comprise a truly moving and lasting tribute to a father 'Dad' who is much loved and clearly missed.... I know such love and the pain you so eloquently describe here Laura... I miss my Dad too...... Neville x
Neville,
Thank you for the visit and the brill comment! Very much appreciated.
Love and prayers for our dads!💜
~Laura~🌻
Bless you Laura, I will drink to that this evening & true..... Neville
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