BROTHER SUN ~ we all

enjoy your gift of Energy

to all of the Earth !

Keep shining Brother we all

love your free Energy supply


SISTER MOON ~ thanks for

shining @ Night ~ while BROTHER 

SUN has a nice sleep !

Thanks for washing beach with tide

Thanks for shining LOVE in HEARTS ! 


Thanks for reading ~ comments welcome ~ Astral Love ~ BRIAN


Never take the SUN & MOON for granted ~ They provide

free energy ~ Heat & Light ~ 24/7 all over Planet Earth. 


  • Christina8

    Well done tankas brother Brian! Great write! Sisterly hugs-Christina


      Thanks CHRISTINA ~ Love your smile ~ you make me smile ! Thanks for your comment ! Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@

    • Fay Slimm.

      Sun and Moon as kith and kin and brought to our eyes in tanka form too - a lovely read Brian.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks FAY ~ That's how I always perceive them BRO & SIS ~ working in perfect Harmony Day & Night for the benefit of our beautiful (and unique) Planet Earth ~ AMEN Yours as ever ~ BRIAN

      • Louis Gibbs

        Even without knowing what a Tanka is, I can appreciate this tribute to the orbs that keep this world going. Nice write, Brian!

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Thanks for your comment LOUIS ~ pleased I made my message clear & plain ! A TANKA is an extended HAIKU with two added lines 57577. The two added lines add meaning to the 575 HAIKU (or SENRYU) to which they are added ~ OK ~ BRIAN Please check my FUSION on COLOR ~ Thanks B.

          • Louis Gibbs

            You are a born teacher, Brian. Kudos!

          • orchidee

            A fine write Brian. As also St Francis of Assisi wrote about. Though we must not go as far as worshipping them.

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              As you know STEVE ~ I am a Christian and not a Pantheist ! There are millions who worship CREATION but not the CREATOR (GOD). St Francis worshiped the TRINITY but always in harmony with Nature ~ so should we ~ AMEN ! BRIAN

            • Goldfinch60

              Good write Brian.

              • BRIAN & ANGELA

                THANKS ANDY ~ Pleased you enjoyed it ! Please check STEVE's comments and my response ~ Yours BRIAN

              • Rosette1206

                I love this. Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing your voice

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  Thanks ROSETTE ~ Pleased you liked it ! There are lots of lovely poems on MPS for you to check ~ Yours BRIAN

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