TRUE LOVE ~ is an experience so rare
When it does happen ~ content we should be
All would cherish ~ but few in their lives share !
It's fashioned in our hearts ~ so please prepare
TRUE LOVE can strike ~ like lightning on a tree
TRUE LOVE ~ is an experience so rare !
Like finding GOLD ~ that no one knew was there
Inside cellar of Ancient Monastery
All would cherish ~ but few in their life share !
We seek for love and grasp it it's there
I cry when TRUE LOVE comes and goes from me
TRUE LOVE is an experience so rare !
BUT ~ When you have it you just know it's there
I every aspect of your LIFE ~ it's plain to see
All would cherish but few in their lives share !
Don't keep it secret ~ all your TRUE LOVE share
Shout it from the rooftops ~ SHE (HE) LOVE ME !
TRUE LOVE is an experience so rare
All would cherish but few in their lives share !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ love BRIAN
A good poem for recitation should have Rhyme ~ Rhythm
Repetition ! A VILLANELLE has all three. It is based on a
rhyming doublet Lines 1 & 3 revealed in lines 18 & 19.
Lines 1 6 12 18 are repeats as are lines 3 9 15 19. Google
VILLANELLE WIKI to learn more about this poetic form.
There are only two rhymes so you have to choose carefully
mine follow from (a) "rare" and (b) "b" The rhyming pattern
is: A1 b A2 a b A1 a b A2 a b A1 a b A2 a b A1 A2 capitals
denote a repeated line. The repetition reinforces the TITLE.
Why not try a VILLANELLE for yourself ? Yours BRIAN XOX
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
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Comments3
A perfect form for describing Love - - you write with such feeling whatever the subject dear Brian.
Thanks FAY ~ for a loving comment ! Yes VILLANELLES are a perfect form for a Love Poem ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
Well, I'll shout it from the rooftop! I share true love! And so do you! We are the lucky ones! Great poem today. I like the repetitive nature of this. guess in todays world true love is hard to find. Great write! Spiritual hugs--Christina
Good write, True love is wondrous.
Thanks ANDY ~ Pleased it rang your BELL ~ BRIAN
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