Ethereal Music.
Shadowy movements of ethereal
music play nebulous games
with the moonlight's white fingers
across uncanny sky-scapes.
Tonight diaphanous curl of filmy
grey smoke whispers its
journey along water's dark mask
with swirls of limpidity.
Time abandoned tiffany dances
mosaic of dewdrop-beauty
on a blackening trout's fishy back
making rainbowed translucence.
Thru' glassy mist night-jet hangs
gauze over sickle-shaped
glow netting half-lit luna lantern
with pale flickered moon-face.
Clouds part and I stand entranced
as the rare yellow ghost
of a flimsy late rainbow skims past
leaving its spell for a moment.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: October 21st, 2017 03:52
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Comments8
Magnificent, perfecto, wondrous, Superb, splendid, brilliant, glorious, outstanding! Straight as an arrow right to my favorites.
Ooooooh those words are greatly appreciated my friend -- thank you loads too for your kind wish to put this in your favourites.
Fay,
You are truly a poetess in every sense of the word! Your choice of words are enchanting! AP said it best in describing your poem! Thoroughly enjoyed reading this charismatic piece of poetry!
Ah - a big thank you dear Laura for your words of encouragement - so pleased you enjoyed the read.
All that wonderful stuff to see on a moonlit night!
Ah - poets have eyes to see even the ethereal with a bit of pure fancy dear Orchi
Very dramatic cool poem
So grateful for your visit and comment dear poet-friend - - moonlight is magic to the eyes of this poet.
Beautiful lyrical write as ever - well done Fay
Your visit and comment is always so welcome my friend - - thank you again.
I don't know what to say that hasn't been said. It's simply a magnificent poem!! You have an uncanny way with words. Just beautiful!
So very pleased when readers like you enjoy my efforts dear Christina - no words can really describe the ethereal but glad you enjoyed this humble try. Thank you again .
lovely fay
What a wonderful write Fay, I was drawn into the beauty of its words, I too was entranced.
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