As summer comes, the winter goes, it should be warm, but yet its cold, in deep july, there's still no heat, because you left, me incomplete...
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Author:
Dewayne Tucker (
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- Category: Sad
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Welcome DEWAYNE ~ Thanks for your first poem. Love comes & Love goes but the experience remains. Many of us in your age group have experiences the ECSTASY of LOVE but also the AGONY so we can emphasise !
I always say better to have loved and lost ~ than never to have loved at all ~ BUT ~ in some cases it is easier said than done ! Every Blessing for the future ~ thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN (UK)
Thank you and bavo
Clever in its simplicity, yet...incomplete
Thank you I enjoy writing small poems
Clever writ....
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