When the moment comes and a relationship forms
Everything seems to be in the norm, until a storm
Hits and destroys the moment
I let go of everything that had hurt me in the past
And all I wanted to do was blast forward into something new
It all comes with a cost, than I might become lost
In the hopes that he will care as much as I did
It feels like I flew around the world just to meet you
Who knew that he would blow me away so easily
Everything has fallen apart, I look over and see my heart flowing down a stream
Tears run down my face, all I want to do is scream
Everything I wanted to be true, just seemed like a waste of time
My body aches and my heart begins to flake
Each piece that runs away turns me more insane
I'm confused by what I want
What I use to flaunt, now haunts me
- Author: Klaire Drumm ( Offline)
- Published: October 24th, 2017 13:31
- Comment from author about the poem: I got dignosed with depression 5 months ago and last month I got dumped. I thought if I was completely honest with myself towards him it would be for the best, but he couldn't handle it. Now I'm trying to find who I am and how I can express it.
- Category: Sad
- Views: 43
- User favorite of this poem: Tris Eaton.
Comments3
WELCOME KLAIRE ~ Thanks for you first poem ~ sharing who you are and how you feel ! You have come to the right site because many Members are or have been DEPRESSED ! You use very powerful language of the ecstasy and agony of love which many of us can empathise with (I am in a Stable Relationship at the moment but who knows ?). We are all SPECIAL but as we grow up we all need someone to share with ~ A Soul Mate ~ I trust you will find one soon ~ Thinking of YOU ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) PISTANTHROPIC ~ Fear of trusting People because of bad experiences with Previous Lovers ~ As we get older (and wiser ?) KLAIRE ~ we all suffer a bit from that !
I think poetry is a good outlet for you. You've definitely got a sense for it. I personally feel that it's a good way to get... in touch with your emotions and feelings so that you can begin to understand them and figure out what exactly to do with them.
I wish you luck and I hope to read more from you!
Good strong write. Poetry helps to get over any problems and to share it with us has untold cures. Welcome to MPS
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.