In our lives many just see darkness,
This darkness causes so much sorrow.
Each day seems endless
As they fall into the dark pit of despair.
But if you just look up,
Lookup with hope,
The light is there.
Hope is being able to see the light,
In spite of the darkness around you.
- Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: October 25th, 2017 01:34
- Comment from author about the poem: Light is always there in our lives, all we need is to open our heart to it.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 46
Comments12
A fine write Gold. We'll have to get up early enough to catch that hour's light in the morning, before the dark evenings.
I am always up early, thanks Orchi.
Beautiful poem, beautifully written, Goldfinch! I think we all know that the light is there, but sometimes we are so involved in our own problems, we just don't see it. Your poem is a great reminder!
Thank you Fred, very true we do need to look around us sometimes.
I'm a half-full person and love the light - why can't others see it? Good write Andy.
Thanks Michael. I too am a half full person.
we all enter into those dark cave and its always a relief to get the hell out of there. a true reminder of how we can all graze our knees every now and then.
Thank you Kevin, that grazing of the knees is to ensure that we don't do the same thing again as we gain life's experience.
Love the write...love the quote! There’s always hope for that ray of light!
Thank you Laura, hope is always there.
“When darkness is at its darkest, a star shines the brightest.”-Louis Phillip
Very true and very good write my friend.
Thank you pb much appreciated.
Thanks for the positive note , you have expressed yourself well here ...a very fine poem
Thank you WL, I am always, or always try to stay positive.
Oh woe! Write me something for me KP wedding, when me light goes out permanently! Well, 99%. heehee.
I will write you a poem, it wasn't you that hacked her cosmetic surgery site was it.
An inspirational insight, this one. Well expressed, Goldie!
Thank you Louis, most kind.
sometimes, we just kept our eyes shut refuse to see the light. Maybe have been in the dark for too long, the light is just too bright. Thank you for the hope.
Thank you for your comments m and m, hope is always there (as is the light).
That is so true! A wonderful write GF! And so inspiring as well!
Thank you Christina, most kind.
just seek the light
It is always there.
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