Hope in the Dark.

Goldfinch60

In our lives many just see darkness,

This darkness causes so much sorrow.

Each day seems endless

As they fall into the dark pit of despair.

But if you just look up,

Lookup with hope,

The light is there.

Hope is being able to see the light,

In spite of the darkness around you.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 25th, 2017 01:34
  • Comment from author about the poem: Light is always there in our lives, all we need is to open our heart to it.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 46
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Comments12

  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold. We'll have to get up early enough to catch that hour's light in the morning, before the dark evenings.

    • Goldfinch60

      I am always up early, thanks Orchi.

    • FredPeyer

      Beautiful poem, beautifully written, Goldfinch! I think we all know that the light is there, but sometimes we are so involved in our own problems, we just don't see it. Your poem is a great reminder!

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Fred, very true we do need to look around us sometimes.

      • Michael Edwards

        I'm a half-full person and love the light - why can't others see it? Good write Andy.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thanks Michael. I too am a half full person.

        • kevin browne

          we all enter into those dark cave and its always a relief to get the hell out of there. a true reminder of how we can all graze our knees every now and then.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Kevin, that grazing of the knees is to ensure that we don't do the same thing again as we gain life's experience.

          • Laura🌻

            Love the write...love the quote! There’s always hope for that ray of light!

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Laura, hope is always there.

            • poetboy123

              “When darkness is at its darkest, a star shines the brightest.”-Louis Phillip

              Very true and very good write my friend.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you pb much appreciated.

              • WL Schuett

                Thanks for the positive note , you have expressed yourself well here ...a very fine poem

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you WL, I am always, or always try to stay positive.

                • orchidee

                  Oh woe! Write me something for me KP wedding, when me light goes out permanently! Well, 99%. heehee.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    I will write you a poem, it wasn't you that hacked her cosmetic surgery site was it.

                  • Louis Gibbs

                    An inspirational insight, this one. Well expressed, Goldie!

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you Louis, most kind.

                    • myself and me

                      sometimes, we just kept our eyes shut refuse to see the light. Maybe have been in the dark for too long, the light is just too bright. Thank you for the hope.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Thank you for your comments m and m, hope is always there (as is the light).

                      • Christina8

                        That is so true! A wonderful write GF! And so inspiring as well!

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Thank you Christina, most kind.

                        • ron parrish aka wordman

                          just seek the light

                          • Goldfinch60

                            It is always there.



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