A world without you
is so cold
the coldness frozen my heart
no pain but numb
A world without you
is so dark
The darkness engulf me
nothing but black
A world without you
is so lonely
the loneliness surround me
no you but me
A world without you
is so sad
the sadness company me
no smile but tears
A world without you
is so dead
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Author:
myself and me (
Offline) - Published: October 26th, 2017 08:36
- Comment from author about the poem: Sorry for the sadness in the poem. Try to let it out of me. My writing might fill with this recently.
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Comments8
A lament sad enough to touch the very core dear friend - -a last line which says it all - -- deep grief so tenderly written .
Thank you my friend. Writing is my way to let it out.
Strikes a sad note but such a good write.
Thank you ME. Hope the note is not too overwhelming.
I'm sure you mean me here in this fine write M! (Delusions of grandeur Orchi. lol). But a world with me - With me as a friend, who needs enemies?! heehee.
Yes, a world with a lot friends like you saved me. Thanks, O.
Lonely , dark , sad ... hope you are finding your way ... writing helps ....
Thank you WL. I will, I will. It simply takes time. Writing is part of the healing.
A world without you is so dead.
That was very powerful. The one who this was about, should take note of your pain. Very well written.
This is the hardest moment I have to overcome by myself. I will be out of it soon. Thank you for reading and comment.
You're welcome. I have to say though, if you look hard enough, you're never by yourself.
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Oh this poem breaks my heart because of the last line but I know its your way of dealing with the pain. So just keep writing and healing! Well written!
Thank you Christina. Writing did help me. Sorry for the heart-breaking line.
It's okay--you never have to apologize for your writing!
M&M, just like all the others here on MPS I am with you and I do feel your pain. It probably doesn't help much, but remember, tomorrow is another day, with another sunrise, and maybe even a beautiful rainbow!
Thank you FP for your understanding and support. It helped a lot. I sure will see that tomorrow one day.
Beautiful sadly emotive write. Inspite of the sadness a very good write.
Thanks G. Hope I could eliminate the sadness soon from my writing.
I am sure that it will happen soon but no matter how sad do not stop writing.
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