Angel and I were

Growing up ~ Loving ~ Cuddling

Kissing ~ PUPPY LOVE !



Exhillorating  !

Kisses & Explorations

Of our Teenage Love !



Exploring love ~ takes

You deeper into each other 

Unexplored depths !



The World remains still

We are lost in each other

Under True Loves Spell !



With age love matures

Slower ~ deeper ~ more gentle 

Much more SENSUAL !



Enveloped in Bliss 

Complete love ~ understanding

TWO HEARTS beat as ONE !


Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love S & B XOX


This Poem is presented as Six Senryu ~ Three composed by SANTITA and three by BRIAN.  SENRYU are essentially HAIKU (5 7 5 syllables) where the Subject is PEOPLE ~ ENJOY !  






  • orchidee

    A fine write there. Got through it without swooning! lol.


    Thanks STEVE ~ We wrote it specially to make you SWOON ~ Please read it again SLOWLY !Blessings S & B


    HOLA SANTI ~ Gracias por Tu COLABORACION ~ Love the sentiments in your three SENRYU and the Picture speaks a Thousand Words ~ SENSUAL ! Besos y Abrazos ~ BRIAN XOX

  • Michael Edwards

    Great collab - congrats to you both.


      Thanks MICHAEL ~ We consider this one worked very well and suitable for ALL AGES and ALL STAGES ! Thanks for your comment ~ Yours as always S & B

    • Fay Slimm.

      You both made the poem shine with all love's wonderful stages.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks FAY ~ pleased you enjoyed ~ I guess you can empathise with memories of all those wonderful stages ! Love Santi & Brian XOX

      • Laura🌻

        Caro Amico Brian!
        Beautiful collaboration with Santita! There definitely are infinite aspects and stages of love! For two so young to declare such sentiments warms my heart! Different stages, different experiences. There are the ups and the downs; the highs and the lows. Four decades later I can say...BEEN THERE, DONE THAT. It has been a great ride! No matter what...LOVE is LOVE! Each stage, each experience will make you wiser...and the brass ring will be yours for the taking! Saluti e abbracci...

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          GRAZIE LAURA ~ Thanks for your comment ! Although SANTI and I are (individually) only at the start of our Experiences of Life & Love ~ we are both optimistic that it can only get better and better ! Hope springs eternal in te Hearts of the Young in Love ! Con Amore e Abbacci ~ Santi e Brian XOXOX

        • Christina8

          You both did a great and colorful presentation on love! Wonderful! Sisterly hugs--Christina

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Thanks CHRISTINA ~ Pleased you enjoyed it ! As you know with Collaborations ~ the result is always greater than the "sum of the individual stanzas !" We are pleased with the result because it treats the very important subject of LOVE in a gentle and progressive manner ! Love & Hugs ~ SANTI & BRIAN XOX

          • myself and me

            Such a colorful love from teen to mature.

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              Thanks M & M ~ SANTI & I (individually) are only at the beginning of LIfe's Journey of Love ~ but our present experiences fill us with optimism for the future. For both of us ~ Love is always a RAINBOW ! Yours SANTI & BRIAN.

            • ShannonXx

              Enjoyed reading this and all the different stages of love! Great perception of them

              • BRIAN & ANGELA

                Thanks SHANNON ~ In the early stages of LOVE we both share from very beautiful personal experiences because we both enjoy the experience and ecstasy of LOVING and being in LOVE. We are both Young but both very loving ~ so we both know we have enough love to share and last us a lifetime. Remember Precious "It is Love the keeps the World spinning on its Axis !" Thanks for your generous comment ! Love SANTI & BRIAN XOXOX

              • Louis Gibbs

                As the Beetles said, "Love is all there is"! Well done, both of you.

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  Thanks LOUIS ~ Our Mantra is: "Love is all you need ~ If you have Love nothing else matters !" To compose a successful "Collaboration Poem" it is necessary to harmonise In Body ~ Mind ~ Spirit ~ we do ! Yours SANTI & BRIAN

                • FredPeyer

                  I very much enjoyed reading your collaboration on love. Same as Laura, been there, done that, and most importantly, am still doing it! 🙂

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  Thanks FRED for your supportive comment ! When SANTI & I chose this Structure (Senryu) and Subject (Love) we both knew ~ because we are young ~ our initial poems would be based on memory and current experience and the later ones retrospective ! However our observations of couples ~ who are 35+ ~ encourages us to really believe that : "Love is not just for the YOUNG ~ but for LIFE" and several of the comments have endorsed that ! Yours SANTI & BRIAN

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