PUPPY LOVE
Angel and I were
Growing up ~ Loving ~ Cuddling
Kissing ~ PUPPY LOVE !
TEENAGE LOVE
Exhillorating !
Kisses & Explorations
Of our Teenage Love !
EXPLORING LOVE
Exploring love ~ takes
You deeper into each other
Unexplored depths !
AWARENESS OF LOVE
The World remains still
We are lost in each other
Under True Loves Spell !
MATURE LOVE
With age love matures
Slower ~ deeper ~ more gentle
Much more SENSUAL !
TOTAL LOVE
Enveloped in Bliss
Complete love ~ understanding
TWO HEARTS beat as ONE !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love S & B XOX
This Poem is presented as Six Senryu ~ Three composed by SANTITA and three by BRIAN. SENRYU are essentially HAIKU (5 7 5 syllables) where the Subject is PEOPLE ~ ENJOY !
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 27th, 2017 01:25
- Comment from author about the poem: There are infinite Aspects and Stages of LOVE for each of us to explore and experience as we grow up ! Each NEW PARTNER brings new delights and experience and takes us to even higher levels of experiential LOVE ! A symbiosis of BODY ~ MIND ~ SPIRIT .................. TWO BECOME ONE ! In my experience LOVE between two people reaches its most satisfying and fulfilling ecstasy when they are together ~ exclusively ~ for Weeks ~ Months and then Years ~ This is what makes Stable & Faithful Partnerships so BEAUTIFUL ! What is your experience of LOVE ? Love to all SANTITA & BRIAN XOX
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A fine write there. Got through it without swooning! lol.
Thanks STEVE ~ We wrote it specially to make you SWOON ~ Please read it again SLOWLY !Blessings S & B
HOLA SANTI ~ Gracias por Tu COLABORACION ~ Love the sentiments in your three SENRYU and the Picture speaks a Thousand Words ~ SENSUAL ! Besos y Abrazos ~ BRIAN XOX
Great collab - congrats to you both.
Thanks MICHAEL ~ We consider this one worked very well and suitable for ALL AGES and ALL STAGES ! Thanks for your comment ~ Yours as always S & B
You both made the poem shine with all love's wonderful stages.
Thanks FAY ~ pleased you enjoyed ~ I guess you can empathise with memories of all those wonderful stages ! Love Santi & Brian XOX
Buongiorno
Caro Amico Brian!
Beautiful collaboration with Santita! There definitely are infinite aspects and stages of love! For two so young to declare such sentiments warms my heart! Different stages, different experiences. There are the ups and the downs; the highs and the lows. Four decades later I can say...BEEN THERE, DONE THAT. It has been a great ride! No matter what...LOVE is LOVE! Each stage, each experience will make you wiser...and the brass ring will be yours for the taking! Saluti e abbracci...
~Laura~
GRAZIE LAURA ~ Thanks for your comment ! Although SANTI and I are (individually) only at the start of our Experiences of Life & Love ~ we are both optimistic that it can only get better and better ! Hope springs eternal in te Hearts of the Young in Love ! Con Amore e Abbacci ~ Santi e Brian XOXOX
You both did a great and colorful presentation on love! Wonderful! Sisterly hugs--Christina
Thanks CHRISTINA ~ Pleased you enjoyed it ! As you know with Collaborations ~ the result is always greater than the "sum of the individual stanzas !" We are pleased with the result because it treats the very important subject of LOVE in a gentle and progressive manner ! Love & Hugs ~ SANTI & BRIAN XOX
Such a colorful love from teen to mature.
Thanks M & M ~ SANTI & I (individually) are only at the beginning of LIfe's Journey of Love ~ but our present experiences fill us with optimism for the future. For both of us ~ Love is always a RAINBOW ! Yours SANTI & BRIAN.
Enjoyed reading this and all the different stages of love! Great perception of them
Thanks SHANNON ~ In the early stages of LOVE we both share from very beautiful personal experiences because we both enjoy the experience and ecstasy of LOVING and being in LOVE. We are both Young but both very loving ~ so we both know we have enough love to share and last us a lifetime. Remember Precious "It is Love the keeps the World spinning on its Axis !" Thanks for your generous comment ! Love SANTI & BRIAN XOXOX
As the Beetles said, "Love is all there is"! Well done, both of you.
Thanks LOUIS ~ Our Mantra is: "Love is all you need ~ If you have Love nothing else matters !" To compose a successful "Collaboration Poem" it is necessary to harmonise In Body ~ Mind ~ Spirit ~ we do ! Yours SANTI & BRIAN
I very much enjoyed reading your collaboration on love. Same as Laura, been there, done that, and most importantly, am still doing it! 🙂
Thanks FRED for your supportive comment ! When SANTI & I chose this Structure (Senryu) and Subject (Love) we both knew ~ because we are young ~ our initial poems would be based on memory and current experience and the later ones retrospective ! However our observations of couples ~ who are 35+ ~ encourages us to really believe that : "Love is not just for the YOUNG ~ but for LIFE" and several of the comments have endorsed that ! Yours SANTI & BRIAN
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