IN AUTUMN ~ When the days grow short
I walked with ANGEL through the Wood
Our steps were light ~ we deep in thought
And life for us ~ was always good
IN AUTUMN ~ When the days grow short !
IN WINTER ~ In the Frost and Snow
We cuddled long ~ by fireside
Into the Woods we could not go
Too dangerous with slip and slide
IN WINTER ~ In the Frost and Snow !
IN SPRING ~ The days are Bright ~ OK
Snowdrops and Bluebells coming out
The cold of WINTER blown away
The Birds & Bees fly round about
In SPRING ~ The days are Bright ~ OK !
IN SUMMER ~ When the days are long
We picked ripe Blackberries in the Wood
Our steps were light ~ Our Love was strong
We feasted on our hedgerow food
IN SUMMER ~ When the days were long !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN & ANGELA
This poem is presented as four QUINTAINS in iambic tetrameter
(eight syllables per line) The rhyming pattern is A b a b A etc.
Important facets of Classical Poetry are Rhyme ~ Rhythm and
Repetition ! These factors facilitate both reading and recitation !
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: When you are in LOVE ~ Each SEASON sings a melody ~ When you are in LOVE ~ Who cares if raindrops fall ~ When you are LOVE ~ Each SEASON sings in harmony ~ They seem to say HEAVEN's not far away ! Love to ALL ~ BRIAN & ANGELA XOXOX
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You are a master at this form Brian - I love the flow of a good iambic quintain - - beautiful picture too.
THNKS FAY ~ Your gracious comment is much appreciated ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
Nice one Brian - great flow to these.
Thanks BRIAN ~ Because I am a Performance Poet I like to both write and read Poems that have great Flow & Rhythm ~ Yours BRIAN
Buongiorno Cari Amici
BRIAN e ANGELA,
le quattro stagioni dellāamore!!
A beautiful message of LOVE
accompanied by a great picture.
The rhyme and rhythm
does make it flow!
Learning a great
deal from you! Thank you.
Saluti e abbracci...
~Laura~
Thanks for your generous reply Laura ! Your Italian title sounds much better than mine ~ but it also sounds like a Perfect Pizza ! I like to explain the structure of the Poem in terms of metre and rhyme pattern ~ OK ! Seasonal Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX
The pizza never crossed
my mind...but youāre right!
It would make sense.
It is lunchtime there.
Itās breakfast time here!
Do you make your own?
SI LAURA ~ TUTTI ABIAMO LE PIZZE ! MAMA bakes the cases and then we make our own fillings ~ we also have lots of takeaway Pizzarias ~ Italian Cuisine Rules OK ~ Abbracci Largi BRIAN XOXOX
Bravo!!
A fine un-swoony write there Brian!
Erm, a technical point. Can you help? Is 'OK' one or two syllables, if I use it? Is it 'O' and 'Kay', or 'Ock'? I wish I would stop talking rubbish! lol.
HI STEVE ~ OK is always TWO SYLLABLES and NHS is three ~ in abbreviations I was taught that each letter is a SYLLABLE USA three etc ! Thanks for your comment ~ I thought you had swooned enough recently ! Yours BRIAN W (double U) is of course ONE LETTER but three syllables so WVS (Woman's Voluntary Service) would be FIVE SYLLABLES etc !
Your love for Angela shines through on these. Great job! Sisterly hugs-Christina
Thanks CHRISTINE ~ we should always pay tribute to those we love in our Poems ~ as you know ! Thanks for your kind comments ~ Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@
Nice writing, Brian. I do like how you describe love in terms of seasons.
Well FRED I am "A Man for All Seasons" and a Man (and a Woman) needs "Love for all Seasons" ~ Thanks for your comment ~ BRIAN !
four seasons of love,one just as strong as the other
Thanks RON ~ it is always good to share OUR LOVE with others on MPS ~ Yours BRIAN
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