O MY GOD ~ You have kept me
Within the Sphere of Your Love
So ~ Year after Year after Year
My Life is enriched by Your Love !
From the first moment of my birth
I was dedicated to Your
SERVICE ~ all my days I have been
Filled with Praise to Your Holy Name !
You have guided mr through my Youth
Now I need Your guidance as I
Grow older and as I take on
Much more responsibility !
I dedicate all my LIFE to
Your Service ~ I TRUST IN YOU ~ AMEN
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN
Because I am a CHRISTIAN ~ everything I do is SERVICE
to My GOD ~ even writing this Poem and the day by day
work of Teaching Applied Science in a College ~ AMEN !
This peom is based on Psalm 71 and is presented as a 4 4 4 2
blank verse sonnet in iambic tetrameter (eight syllables per line).
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 29th, 2017 04:01
- Category: Spiritual
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Comments5
Buongiorno Caro Amico BRIAN!
A beautiful and
spiritual write!
Reading your poem this morning has made me feel like I’ve gone to church, listened to the homily, consoled my inner being, and came back home to have my coffee!
Buona domenica!
Saluti e abbracci...
~Laura~
BUONA DOMENICA LAURA
You can call me Father BRIAN ~ in essence it is a Homily ~ It is based on PSALM 71 and you can read it over & over and get fresh Blessing each time ! Avetes una grande Domenica ! Abbracci Molti ~ Papa Brian XOX
Some hints of Psalm 71 here, entitled in some versions 'A prayer in old age'. Erm not that you're that old'! I am of course millions of years old. lol. A fine write Brian.
Well spotted STEVE ~ I omitted add my source ~ but now have added ! I only included the references to Youth & Responsibility (an oxymoron ?). At 34 I am just at the end of the first third of my Life ! Thanks for your comments ~ Yours BRIAN
Beautiful sunday poem, Brian! I find this very uplifting--Sister Christina
Your Faith shines through this write Brian.
Thanks ANDY ~ Christians are called to be WITNESSES to the Love of God ! It is an integral part of our Christian Service ~ AMEN BRIAN
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