WE ALL have problems ~ big and small
Some of them we share with a Friend
We try to solve our own problems
Move on to a problem free end !
We work hard avoiding problems
Please help others how to avoid
Problem free ~ we all want to be
We want to be built ~ not destroyed !
We should all try to work smoothly
Ensure small problems ~ don't grow big
Please Love and Help all your Colleagues
Don't hog the limelight ~ don't be a PIG !
Be concerned for THEM ~ as Yourself
DON'T LEAVE ANYONE ~ STUCK ON A SHELF !
Be concerned for THEM ~ as Yourself
Don't hog the limelight ~ don't be a PIG
Please Love and Help all your Colleagues
Ensure small problems ~ don't grow big
We should all try to work smoothly
We want to be built ~ not destroyed !
Problem free ~ we all want to be
Please help others how to avoid
We work hard avoiding problems
Move on to a problem free end !
We try to solve our own problems
Some of them we share with A Friend
WE ALL have problems ~ big and small
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN
A Mirror Sonnet only has 27 lines (not 28) Line 14
of the top Sonnet is not repeated and doubles as
Line 1 of the lower (mirror) Sonnet. Linguistically
it shouldn't work but surprisingly it does ~ try one !
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BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
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The need for a friend comes to everyone and this fine mirror sonnet outlines the reasons for being there to listen and comfort. A lovely read again Brian.
Thanks FAY ~ I have now corrected and added a visual ~ please revisit ~ thanks BRIAN I try to emphasise that Halloween is also ALL SAINTS (Hallowed Eve) If we all acted as SAINTS the World would be a much better place ! Did you see the programme last night on Cornish Coastal Walks ~ awesome ! The East Coast is very tame by comparison ! Yours as ever BRIAN.
Wonderful mirror sonnet! And also a great message.Really well done. Holy hugs-Christina
THANKS CHRIS ~ Your comments are always so so encouraging ~ Holy hugs for YOU too ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@
Buongiorno
Caro Amico BRIAN!
Grazie per il bel messaggio!
Thank you for this beautiful
selfless message! Your generosity and concern for your fellow man
is admirable!
HAPPY HALLOWED EVE!
I enjoyed the read and
visual. Nice touch!!:)
Saluti e abbracci...
~Laura ~
CAIO LAURS ~ AMICA CARA ~ Pleased you got the message ! "Please be kind to everybody !" Molti Abbracci ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@
I always try my best!
Thereās no joy in
hurting others!
A beautiful poem in a beautiful shape.
Thanks M & M ~ Pleased you liked the SUBJECT and the STRUCTURE ~ Yours BRIAN
A fine write Brian. Aww, but piggies are not rude, are they? No more than any other animals at the rush at feeding times?!
Same as I must stop insulting cats, by saying 'Is it me singing or two cats fighting'?! lol.
So - All Saints - Hallowmas (or Hallowmass) follows. Not that I go to 'Mass. Let's not get started on that! doh!
Friends are special. Clever write Brian.
Thanks ANDY ~ some days it is only Friends 7 Family ~ that make life bearable ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
It's a horrible day celebrating Halloween in itself. Too much blackness, darkness, people dressing up as devils, etc.
I know - some only go to witches covens for a bit of slap and tickle, but there's real dangers in it!
THANKS STEVE ~ I agree Halloween ~ Voodoo ~ Ouija ~ Tarot Cards etc ~ all these things provide a "Gateway" for SATAN to corrupt minds ~ we have a LIGHT PARTY @ Church which is well attended by Children and their Parents who don't want their kids corrupted by HALLOWEEN ! As usual I always try to spread a lttle PEACE & LIGHT yours BRIAN
Nice writing, great subject, incredible craftsman!
Thanks FRED ~ pleased you enjoyed it ! I'm always very pleased when it turns out as sensible and readable Line 14 back to ONE as it does as it was written Line ONE to 14 ~ but it does ! I guess the skill lies in choosing both the subject and words very carefully. The is the poets art always ~
WORDSMANSHIP ! Yours BRIAN
I love that with most poems you explain how they are written. I have been trying to learn new ways to write. Thank you very good read. Friend are few and between.
Thanks SIMONE ~ I appreciate your comment ! There are many many styles of Poetry ! If I post one I always try to explain how it is structure. Every POEM has a SUBJECT ~ I am a Performance Poet so if a POEM has STRUCTURE as well (Sonnet ~ Haiku etc) it makes it easier to read and much easier to recite ! Yours BRIAN ~ Your MPS FRIEND !
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