Mugsdaddy

My Goddess

She comes at me like a thunderstorm tearing through my dreams, invading every inch of me till I'm bursting at the seams 

She moves her body all around me like a snake terrorizing its prey, her mouth working my member till it's wet in the spot that I lay 

Instinctively my hands reach to hold her but she easily evades my grip, she slithers in behind me and assists me as I strip 

Her hands are all around me like I'm flailing in a lake, the lust it overwhelms me and I never want to wake 

Again I reach to find her, her breast held firmly in my hands, in a massive wave of passion we find we've washed up on the sands 

She moves herself beneath me but I'm not ready to commit, as my tongue explores her body I become addicted to the taste of it 

I find her female wetness my mind loses all track of time, as the waves keep washing over her I now know that she is mine 

I push myself in side her the pleasure is more than she can take, her arms go limp her legs go numb and Her body begins to shake 

Finally she's won me over as we reach our lustful Bliss, The Darkness Falls and the dream is over as I try to take my lover's kiss 

She only comes to me in the nighttime but I know just how I feel, I curse the day till the edge of night because I know our love is real 

Comments9

  • Santita

    WOW, what an erotically charged write! So full of passion & excellent flow! Creative & great write, Mugsy!

  • Mugsdaddy

    Glad you enjoyed it. I was feeling a little frisky this morning.

  • FredPeyer

    With nights like that, no wonder you curse the days! :-)
    Great writing, very erotic, great imagery.

    • Mugsdaddy

      I went through a months supply of sleeping pills in a week... But what a week.
      Mugs

    • Michael Edwards

      Some write M - held me to the end.

      • Mugsdaddy

        Thanks Mr. E
        I always appreciate your comments.
        Mugs

      • Fay Slimm

        A passionate piece of prose Mugs - - I am in need of a cooling shower after this read.

      • Mugsdaddy

        Take someone with you and I want to read about that.
        Mugsdaddy

      • WL Schuett

        How lucky to have such dreams , I hope I do too but I never remember lol
        Fun poem

        • Mugsdaddy

          If only you could hook up a dvr to your brain, then you call up a dream anytime.

        • Goldfinch60

          Very good erotic write Mugs.

        • Mugsdaddy

          I left it out because I didn't want to embarrass you but she was screaming Go60 the entire time.
          Mugs



        To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.