After this moment

myself and me

 

 

Sitting silently

next to you

holding your hand tightly

to feel the warmth of you

looking at your face carefully

to remember every detail of you

after this moment

there will be no we

but you and I

 

The room is deadly quiet

I can hear the crack of my heart

blood deluged my chest

chocked me

after this moment

there will be no I

only you

 

My world is crushing

dark and cold

my body is numb

my mind is blank

after this moment

there will be no you

only I

 

  • Author: myself and me (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 2nd, 2017 14:11
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Mugsdaddy

    Very sad kinda leaves a hole in your chest.
    Mugsdaddy

    • myself and me

      Yes, the hollowness inside is like a black hole.

    • FredPeyer

      M&M, this is so sad, but beautifully expressed. I like the way you structured it, especially the last three lines of each stanza.

    • Michael Edwards

      Great piece of structured writing - really enjoyed this one.

    • Fay Slimm.

      A very poetic way with sorrowful words my friend. A compelling read.

    • Laura🌻

      A beautifully write about
      a sad subject! Relatable
      to my mom and dad.
      Her world did crush as
      did ours. Thank you for
      the write!

      • myself and me

        Thank you Laura for your comment and fav it.

      • Christina8

        Such a sad but well written write M&M! Very nicely done!

      • Accidental Poet

        So very expressive of your emotions. Well written m&m.

        • myself and me

          Thank you AP for reading and fav it.

        • WL Schuett

          A fine poem with a lot of emotions mostly sad but there is something hopeful in there also

          • myself and me

            Thanks WL for reading and commenting.

          • Goldfinch60

            Beautiful emotive write.

            • myself and me

              Thanks G. for reading and comments.



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