Sitting silently
next to you
holding your hand tightly
to feel the warmth of you
looking at your face carefully
to remember every detail of you
after this moment
there will be no we
but you and I
The room is deadly quiet
I can hear the crack of my heart
blood deluged my chest
chocked me
after this moment
there will be no I
only you
My world is crushing
dark and cold
my body is numb
my mind is blank
after this moment
there will be no you
only I
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Author:
myself and me (
Offline) - Published: November 2nd, 2017 14:11
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Comments9
Very sad kinda leaves a hole in your chest.
Mugsdaddy
Yes, the hollowness inside is like a black hole.
M&M, this is so sad, but beautifully expressed. I like the way you structured it, especially the last three lines of each stanza.
Thank you FP.
Great piece of structured writing - really enjoyed this one.
Thank you M.E.
A very poetic way with sorrowful words my friend. A compelling read.
Thanks Fay.
A beautifully write about
a sad subject! Relatable
to my mom and dad.
Her world did crush as
did ours. Thank you for
the write!
Thank you Laura for your comment and fav it.
Such a sad but well written write M&M! Very nicely done!
Thanks Christina.
So very expressive of your emotions. Well written m&m.
Thank you AP for reading and fav it.
A fine poem with a lot of emotions mostly sad but there is something hopeful in there also
Thanks WL for reading and commenting.
Beautiful emotive write.
Thanks G. for reading and comments.
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