Life Within Me.

Goldfinch60

 

The blank sheet is there before me,

It stares back and challenges me,

Challenges me to write.

This battle happens every time,

It is a battle I can always win,

As when the pen touches the page

And the first word is written

I know I have won,

I know that my life

Is still within me.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 4th, 2017 03:00
  • Comment from author about the poem: The Blank Page awaits.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 107
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
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  • orchidee

    Good write Gold. Do I cheat?! I may write 2 or 3 some days, and none on other days. Am I writing in advance?! lol.

    • Goldfinch60

      That is not cheating, I write at least one a day and generally two or three.

    • FredPeyer

      Great poem, Goldfinch! That white sheet (or white screen) is always a challenge. But as you say, the moment we put some black on it, we have won the challenge.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Fred, so true.

      • Accidental Poet

        Goldie, in just opening the page you've won as you've answered the challenge by being there in front of it. What you put on the page is all icing on the cake.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you AP, that is a great thought.

        • Louis Gibbs

          To express is to be alive. Conversely, being alive is expressing. Well documented in your fine poem, Goldie!

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Louis, much appreciated.

          • WL Schuett

            May you always fill a page ....

            • Goldfinch60

              I will do what I can.

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              When writing (and especially when posting !) ANDY ~ Please remember ~ The moving hand doth write ~ And having writ moves on ~ Nor all thy piety or wit can move it back to cancel half a line ~ Nor all thy tears wash out a word of it ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Brian, very true.

              • rrodriguez

                I'm in the process of writing my next poem and is difficult to get it right. But eventually it will come out and be nice. Well written piece my friend.

                • Goldfinch60

                  It will come out and will be a pleasure to read, thank you rr.



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