My Forever After.

Goldfinch60



The wedding was over,

The vows given and received,

All were happy.

The love of the couple

Shining like the silken moon

In their eyes.

 

Sometime later

A drink in our hands

The groom and I stood together,

Just chatting,

“Are you happy?” I asked,

And his reply astounded me,

“This day I have found my forever after”

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 6th, 2017 02:41
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is true. Our next door neighbours were married on Saturday and in the evening I was chatting to the groom and the words in the poem were what he said after I have asked him if he was happy.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 27
  • User favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet.
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Comments7

  • orchidee

    Lovely write Gold.

  • FredPeyer

    Man, Goldfinch, I have been staring at that last line forever, and still don't know what I am after!

    • Goldfinch60

      When he said that to me I was totally taken aback, I told him that there was a poem there. I gave him and his wife the poem over the fence yesterday and they were both close to tears after reading, she said to him "Did you really say that?"

    • Accidental Poet

      A poem as beautiful as the love they share. Great job Goldie.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Thanks ANDY for caring & sharing ~ As you remind us for a RELATIONSHIP to work "Love is all you NEED" to be "Happy ever after !" everything else is a BONUS ~ ANGELA & I are working on it ! Yours BRIAN

      • Goldfinch60

        Thanks Brian, love is all. Tomorrow it will be 36 years since I walked back up the aisle with my wonderful Joyce.

      • Christina8

        That's so touching! Wonderful write, GF! I'm also glad you could write this poem for the happy couple!

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Christina, they were very moved.

        • myself and me

          Congratulation to the new couple and thank you for sharing such a lovely moment.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you m and m, it was certainly a lovely moment.

          • Louis Gibbs

            Good attitude to start a marriage with! Lets hope it works out that way for them. Thanks for sharing, Goldie!

            • Goldfinch60

              I am sure it will be fine Louis.



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