The wedding was over,
The vows given and received,
All were happy.
The love of the couple
Shining like the silken moon
In their eyes.
Sometime later
A drink in our hands
The groom and I stood together,
Just chatting,
“Are you happy?” I asked,
And his reply astounded me,
“This day I have found my forever after”
- Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: November 6th, 2017 02:41
- Comment from author about the poem: This is true. Our next door neighbours were married on Saturday and in the evening I was chatting to the groom and the words in the poem were what he said after I have asked him if he was happy.
- Category: Love
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Comments7
Lovely write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
Man, Goldfinch, I have been staring at that last line forever, and still don't know what I am after!
When he said that to me I was totally taken aback, I told him that there was a poem there. I gave him and his wife the poem over the fence yesterday and they were both close to tears after reading, she said to him "Did you really say that?"
A poem as beautiful as the love they share. Great job Goldie.
Thank you AP, most kind.
Most deserving. ; )
Thanks ANDY for caring & sharing ~ As you remind us for a RELATIONSHIP to work "Love is all you NEED" to be "Happy ever after !" everything else is a BONUS ~ ANGELA & I are working on it ! Yours BRIAN
Thanks Brian, love is all. Tomorrow it will be 36 years since I walked back up the aisle with my wonderful Joyce.
That's so touching! Wonderful write, GF! I'm also glad you could write this poem for the happy couple!
Thank you Christina, they were very moved.
Congratulation to the new couple and thank you for sharing such a lovely moment.
Thank you m and m, it was certainly a lovely moment.
Good attitude to start a marriage with! Lets hope it works out that way for them. Thanks for sharing, Goldie!
I am sure it will be fine Louis.
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