Glorious sunshine
Radiating heat
Spreading warmth
To hearts
And souls
Butterflies dancing
In stomachs
And minds
Love floating
Through space
Happy laughter
Twinkling eyes
With smiles
Reflections of
Endearing kindness
Joy overflowing
Fountains of
Liquid euphoria
With peace
And serenity
Sun’s rays
Delighting the
Senses
Elated to
Be alive
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Author:
Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 9th, 2017 00:17
- Comment from author about the poem: My second experiment in one/two word lines, this time the opposite of yesterday's poem "Cold Rain". Found out that it is much harder to write upbeat, happy, then sad and dark.
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Comments11
Wonderful positive write, the wonder that sunshine can bring to us is always good.
Good style of writing as well Fred.
Thank you Goldfinch. This is my second experiment with one/two word lines and it was much harder to write than the first one. Glad you like it! Thanks!
Just great - it works so well - more?
Thanks so much Michael! Not right now, have something else up my sleeve! 🙂
Is it an arm ? LoL 🙂
A fine write Fred. And then it rained.... that put the tin hat on it! lol.
I suppose it's easier sometimes to be long. One can just waffle on (no change there then for me?).
Thanks orchidee, yes it seems to be easier if we can use more words. Keeping it to a minimum I think is harder. The next thing I want to try is to do a one/two word per line poem that rhymes. That'll be a challenge!
A great write comes from you Fred no matter how the style you write.
Ahww, AP, thank you so much for this vote of confidence! Are you trying to butter me up? Do you need anything? 🙂
I'd love a refresher on summer Fred. Maybe I'll need more butter for that eh?
A beautiful poem, Fred! Not just the style, which I like, but the happy content and the ending "elated to be alive". Great message as I start my day!
Thanks Christina, I do wish all my days would be like that, but......
Fun juxtaposition from yesterday’s poem ,Fred ,equally as good
Thank you WL, that's exactly what I wanted to do, but as I said in my comment and above, it was much harder to write than the first one.
A beautiful day to enjoy. Simply love this short form.
Thanks so much m&m! I do like it too and will probably try to write some more in this form.
Five uplifting short poems I see here, Fred. Can't connect them in my mind too well, but enjoyed them just the same. Interesting experimentation you are doing! Congratulations for roaming outside the box.
You are so right, Louis! I just read it again, and the five stanzas really do feel like separate poems. But I do think that the subject matter holds them together at least a bit. Thanks so much for pointing it out! It takes a poet to see that.
Love these informing two liners Fred - - sunshine written like this feels so warm and inviting. Great read.
Coming from such an accomplished writer as you Fay, your comment does mean a lot! Thank you!
I enjoyed reading this warm expression, especially since I started my day below freezing. Thanks for the warm up.
Thanks lasergraph, just trying to spread some of our warmth here to colder areas of the country! 🙂
Beautiful piece!
Thank you for reading and commenting, poetboy. I do appreciate it!
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