Remembrance Reconcilings

orchidee



Tune: Thaxted (Holst)

('I vow to thee, my country')

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An autumnal remembrance, we once again do sense

Recalling those partaking, each sacrificial thing

Come Lord, our memories heal, where we torment still feel

The pain of wars and conflict, where they hinder, restrict

Memories too we recall, those who gave some or all 

Their love, their duty faithful, they did obey their call

 

For peace we pray, beseeching, you Lord of peace, our King

Who too your life did give free, suffered redemptively

Bring comfort and forgiveness, look on us and us bless

Turn hearts to you repentant, and faith in you, you [were] sent

From the Father in your love, and Spirit, holy dove

Spread wings of mercy and grace o'er all the human race

 

Man's fightings, wars, man 'gainst man, who seeking, supposed can

Gain earthly kingdom, though be in total vanity

For nothing can we retain, all shall be loss and feign

Lord help us your kingdom seek, revealed to humble, meek

But not all men we condemn, for flow of evil's stem

Caused many necessary that they should engage combat

 

Help us Lord, take up spiritual weapons and on you call

To fight not with flesh and blood, but rather that we should

Partake spiritual warfare, do our part, take our share

Not go in our strength alone, God's power be it known

As we put on whole armour of God, to action stir

So His kingdom shall increase and endless never cease 

 

 

  • Author: orchidee (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 11th, 2017 09:28
  • Comment from author about the poem: A hymn-poem in 13.13.13.13.13.13. metre. I broke it down into 7.6. lines, then joined lines together to make 13 syllables per line. The lines rhyme within themselves, rather than at the end of each line. This is generally indicated by commas. In a few places two lines of 7.6. joined together make sense as a whole sentence. Not really a new 'experiment'. Just that it's easier to compose in 7.6. form.
  • Category: Spiritual
  • Views: 13
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Comments4

  • w c

    Another fine write, Orchidee!

    • orchidee

      Thanks wc.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Thanks STEVE ~ Great Hymn ~ for Remembrance Day and an equally great Poem. I often use "internal rhyming" it gives a Poem great flow and rhythm ~ when recited. I can understand Steve ~ that for a Man of your age and mysticism ~ a Lucky 7 and a Humane 6 would be much easier to handle than ~ WHOOOOR ~ an Unlucky 13 ! Your Patriotic Friend ~ BRIAN

      • orchidee

        Thanks Brian. Oh, I dunno about 'luck', but what's all this going around speaking in 13-syllable sentences?! They are probably too long for me. lol. But I should have grasped it by now, seeing I'm millions of years old. lol.

      • FredPeyer

        Orchidee, this is more than a hymn, this is a beautiful tribute to those who served. Thank you.

        • orchidee

          Thanks Fred.

        • Goldfinch60

          Very good hymn Orchi.

          • orchidee

            Thanks Gold.



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