‘I will always love you’
He murmured close to me
I hope it to be forever true
But dread it will not be
- Author: Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: November 13th, 2017 11:41
- Category: Unclassified
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- Users favorite of this poem: Drewp, alisha
Comments5
Super rhythm - fine write Fred
Thanks Michael, life is unpredictable!
Two sides to love's coin given very poetically here Fred. Good read.
Thank you Fay! No matter how much we want to believe, there are always doubts!
A fine write Fred. My dread has come true in me marriage to KP. lol.
Thanks orchidee, but you don't have to worry. When KP whispered it to you, she did not mean it. One day you will be free again!
Nicely thought out piece , good poem
Thanks WL, sometimes thinking about four lines takes a lot longer than thinking through a multi stanza poem!
Very strong write, I too hope it will be forever.
For you and me, Goldie, it will be forever!
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