Mind imagined reality
Leading us to see
What we think may be
Creating false images
Of the reality that is
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Author:
Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 23rd, 2017 03:25
- Category: Reflection
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A little gem Fred - I really enjoyed reading it
Thanks so much, Michael! Need to get to bed, sleep, and then tomorrow morning get ready for the Thanksgiving turkey!
A fine write Fred. A real turkey or an imagined one there?!
Thanks orchidee, I live in the States, we got two turkeys, one in the White House and one on the table!
And maybe the one on the table and in the White House should trade places.
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One persons reality is another ones dream. Good write.
Thanks Goldfinch! Yes, and some people don't know anymore what is real and what is not!
LOL, laughing with orchi's question.
Happy Thanksgiving Fred
Thanks AP, please see my answer to orchi!
And a very happy Thanksgiving to you and your family too!
If this were a 'Fusioned' poem, I would add a last line; 'In fact but a dream'. It is a fine, insightful poem as it stands, Fred!
Thanks Louis, and a very fine addition it is!
I like the reality we are on, has its ups and downs. But then so does our pulse 😉
Thanks Dan! Sometimes what we think is real is not and vice versa!
Brilliant.
Thank you m&m! Your very much appreciated comment just proves that my poem does have a valid point. You consider it 'brilliant', but maybe that is just your mind playing games with you! ;_) In reality it maybe deserves 'good'!
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