Reality?

FredPeyer

Mind imagined reality

Leading us to see

What we think may be

Creating false images

Of the reality that is

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  • Michael Edwards

    A little gem Fred - I really enjoyed reading it

    • FredPeyer

      Thanks so much, Michael! Need to get to bed, sleep, and then tomorrow morning get ready for the Thanksgiving turkey!

    • orchidee

      A fine write Fred. A real turkey or an imagined one there?!

      • FredPeyer

        Thanks orchidee, I live in the States, we got two turkeys, one in the White House and one on the table!

        • FredPeyer

          LOL, good one!

        • Goldfinch60

          One persons reality is another ones dream. Good write.

          • FredPeyer

            Thanks Goldfinch! Yes, and some people don't know anymore what is real and what is not!

          • Louis Gibbs

            If this were a 'Fusioned' poem, I would add a last line; 'In fact but a dream'. It is a fine, insightful poem as it stands, Fred!

            • FredPeyer

              Thanks Louis, and a very fine addition it is!

            • Poetic Dan

              I like the reality we are on, has its ups and downs. But then so does our pulse 😉

              • FredPeyer

                Thanks Dan! Sometimes what we think is real is not and vice versa!

              • myself and me

                Brilliant.

                • FredPeyer

                  Thank you m&m! Your very much appreciated comment just proves that my poem does have a valid point. You consider it 'brilliant', but maybe that is just your mind playing games with you! ;_) In reality it maybe deserves 'good'!



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