Build Bridges - Senryu.

Argue with others

And walls between us are made,

Build bridges not walls.


  • Michael Edwards

    Yup - a great piece - if only...!

  • kevin browne

    indeed, well pointed out, GoldFinch60, and everyone should learn and carry this on forever.

  • orchidee

    Yep, great write Gold. In fact, part of a message of a sermon/talk I heard recently.
    Oohh, I'm not asleep in them! Well, it helps seeing the talk on a screen AND hearing it at the same time. I fairly often take notes too, during the talk. Then sometimes am able to form it into a hymn-poem. One to follow soon....
    I'm afraid of crossing some literal bridges. I think I might fall in a river. But that's another aspect.

  • Louis Gibbs

    If only. Fine write, Goldie.

  • FredPeyer

    ...and some of us were hippies at one time! Sage advice - well said, Goldfinch!

  • Christina8

    Yeah, tell that to our government! Absolutely wonderful piece, GF!

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