CHICKS
Chicks small and fluffy
Hatched from eggs
In a chicken coop
Covered by mum
Keeping them warm
Scratching and chirping.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: An acrostic from the back catalogue.
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Chicks are wondrous to behold. Good write.
Only had a goose/swan drawing so you have to use imagination - thanks Andy
A fine write and pic M. Erm, are they swans in the pic?!
I got to have a lie down to recover. I've read too many long words this early in some poems, in the morning already!
Like chicks? I just drew them for the sake of line - they could be swans or even geese - but they sure aint chicks.
Small but excellency is there!
Thank you for your kind words.
Love the line drawing and adore fluffy chicks - I know though that the duo were not one and the same - - an appealing acrostic Michael.
Thanks Fay
Thanks Michael.
A delightfhl poem and so poignant.
Keep writing
FineB
Chicks are so cute--nice drawing and acrostic! Nice write.
Made me feel warm and cozy, this one. Like the accompanying sketch, too!
Really want to hole them in hand.
Nicely done, Michael!
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