a journey of raindrops

Frank Prem

when they fall
they begin from the bottom
of the top

 

soaring gliding flying
colliding avoiding riding

 

they stop their fall
a dead halt
when they strike the top

 

pounding smashing splatting
rebounding soaking landing

 

where the earth meets the sky
they journey no more

 

~

  • Author: Frank Prem (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 1st, 2017 02:49
  • Comment from author about the poem: Apt for the day. 60ml rain, with maybe another 100ml to come in the next 24 hours.\r\n\r\nAll well so far.
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 9
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Frank.

  • Michael Edwards

    Super write I can see them, hear them, smell them.

    • Frank Prem

      Thank you Michael.

    • Goldfinch60

      Very good write but to me raindrops will end up in the river, then the sea and eventually into clouds where they will fall as raindrops once more, like life's ever changing circle.

      • Frank Prem

        That seems about right GF. Cheers.



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