Goldfinch60

Count Rainbows.



We go through our lives each day,

We have good days,

We have bad days.

As you go through them

We need to remember that this is life,

This is what life is.

But do not dwell on the bad days,

They will become storms

And drag us down into despair.

So look up to the light

And always remember

To count your Rainbows,

Not your thunderstorms.

Comments9

  • Michael Edwards

    Great advice so well expressed.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Michael, most kind.

    • orchidee

      Good write and clip Gold. We can know it's not just wishful thinking or escapism. Are you a wise bird? And if so, a blackbird, or that lune bird in your poem?!
      A thunderstorm can be exciting - if we're not outdoors in the middle of it!

    • Syd

      This is excellent Goldfinch.

      Great poem. Great message

      -Syd

      • Goldfinch60

        Thanks Syd, much appreciated.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Wonderful first read of my day Goldi - - rainbows are what we all need to see and believe in. Thanks for this posting.

        • Goldfinch60

          Rainbows are magical and mean so much. Thanks Fay.

        • Brycycle

          Love this :)

        • Laura

          Your reflective poem reminds me of one of
          Joseph Campbell’s quotes...
          “We must be willing to let go of the life we planned,
          so as to have the
          life that is waiting for us.”

          Great write!
          I enjoyed listening to the clip!
          ~Laura~

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Laura, life is full of surprises that we didn't plan.

            • Laura

              That’s for certain!

            • Louis Gibbs

              Life is experiencing. We must be appreciative of the gift of experiencing both ends of the spectrum ... the rainbows and the storms.
              Well expressed in this good poem, Goldie!

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Louis, yes we must experience both ends.

              • myself and me

                Wonderful and positive message. The best way to live a life.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you m and m I am always positive.

                • Tony36

                  Well written and expressed

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Tony, much appreciated.

                    • Tony36

                      Welcome



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