TEACHINGS

Louis Gibbs

 

We are taught the thoughts to think

We are taught the words to say

We are taught the things to hate

We are taught the roles to play

 

It is curious

Given the above

We needn't be taught

Whom, or what,

To love

 

 

  • Author: Louis Gibbs (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 13th, 2017 00:00
  • Comment from author about the poem: Curious, indeed!
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 36
  • Users favorite of this poem: FredPeyer
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  • Synesthesia

    Indeed, curious!

    Not a wasted word, nice work.

    Only thing, my penny’s worth, take out your commas, add one after above. Just mho.

    S

    • Louis Gibbs

      Thanks, Syn! I think I will add the coma after 'above'. But if I'm going to have any of them, I still like the emphasis they create after 'Whom', and 'What'. Might leave them. Your input is greatly appreciated! Thanks.

    • Goldfinch60

      Good write and very true - we know.

      • Louis Gibbs

        Yes, we very naturally do, Goldie. Thanks!

      • Michael Edwards

        So true but controversially 'taught' can often be a synonym for 'told' - great work Louis

        • Louis Gibbs

          Yes, we are both taught and told what to do for sure. 'Taught' used in the context of the poem, refers to the societal and parental 'programing' we all undergo.
          Thank you so much for your comment, Michael!

          • Michael Edwards

            Indeed - do we brain wash our children? Vexed thoughts indeed.

          • orchidee

            A fine reflection Louis.

            • Louis Gibbs

              Many thanks, 'O'.

            • FredPeyer

              Louis, I made this a favorite because I want to read it again and again. It's a "thinker" poem that opens up a whole range of questions. What is taught, what is instinct? What comes natural?
              Very well written and very intriguing.

              • Louis Gibbs

                Much of what is 'taught', (programed into us) is parental and societal programing inflicted in childhood. We can spend our lives undoing that, if ever.
                Thank you so much for your comment and for making it a fav, Fred!



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