FredPeyer

My Song

Gentle trade winds sing your song

Whispering to me where I belong

In the twilight shadows of the moon

Hidden promises hum their tune

Void of heart my lonely chest

A sadly empty space at best

Cemetery of broken dreams

Of leaden tears and muted screams

Eternal hope now buried deep

Still feel your presence in my sleep

Gentle trade winds sing my song

Whispering to you where you belong

Comments7

  • Candlewitch

    dear Fred,
    this is so very wistful... and lovely!

    *hugs, Cat

    • FredPeyer

      Thank you so much, Cat! I have been and am very busy and have to 'steal' time to get onto the site. Was looking for your writings, but could not find anything. Will look again!

    • Michael Edwards

      Super work Fred

      • FredPeyer

        Thank you kindly, Michael. Coming from you this means a lot!

      • Abora

        this is lovely stuff, fred.

        I felt so much from so few words.

        • FredPeyer

          And this is a lovely comment! Thanks so much, Abora!

        • Accidental Poet

          Wow Fred, another great write on the wind.

          • FredPeyer

            Thanks AP! You are so right, I do like to use the wind metaphor.

          • Clarita

            What a lovely poem!! Thank you for sharing.

            • FredPeyer

              Thank you so much Clarita, for reading and commenting.

            • Goldfinch60

              Wonderfully emotive write.

              • FredPeyer

                Thanks Goldfinch! Emotions is what it is all about!

              • skyebellasario

                Fred this has to be one of your best pieces! It is breathtaking

                • FredPeyer

                  Thanks Skye! Two making me blush comments in a row! I will need a bigger hat soon. Very much appreciated!



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