FredPeyer

My Song

Gentle trade winds sing your song

Whispering to me where I belong

In the twilight shadows of the moon

Hidden promises hum their tune

Void of heart my lonely chest

A sadly empty space at best

Cemetery of broken dreams

Of leaden tears and muted screams

Eternal hope now buried deep

Still feel your presence in my sleep

Gentle trade winds sing my song

Whispering to you where you belong

Comments9

  • Candlewitch

    dear Fred,
    this is so very wistful... and lovely!

    *hugs, Cat

    • FredPeyer

      Thank you so much, Cat! I have been and am very busy and have to 'steal' time to get onto the site. Was looking for your writings, but could not find anything. Will look again!

    • Michael Edwards

      Super work Fred

      • FredPeyer

        Thank you kindly, Michael. Coming from you this means a lot!

      • Abora

        this is lovely stuff, fred.

        I felt so much from so few words.

        • FredPeyer

          And this is a lovely comment! Thanks so much, Abora!

        • LAWLESS

          Diversity, diversity. I don't know how you do it man. A soulful, stunning write!

          "Cemetery of broken dreams". James Dean and Marilyn would've loved this one.

          Mike

          • FredPeyer

            Thanks Mike! How do I do it? Easy, I sit in front of the keyboard and let my fingers do the talking. And after reading your so very kind comment, mentioning James Dean, I thought that 'Cemetery of broken dreams' probably would have made a nice movie title.

          • Accidental Poet

            Wow Fred, another great write on the wind.

            • FredPeyer

              Thanks AP! You are so right, I do like to use the wind metaphor.

            • Clarita

              What a lovely poem!! Thank you for sharing.

              • FredPeyer

                Thank you so much Clarita, for reading and commenting.

              • Goldfinch60

                Wonderfully emotive write.

                • FredPeyer

                  Thanks Goldfinch! Emotions is what it is all about!

                • Santita

                  Fred, I am blown away by this. Really touching and beautiful!! This is one of my absolute favorites by you!

                  • FredPeyer

                    Thank you Santi! You are making me blush! But since I am soooo vain, I gratefully accept the compliments! :-)

                  • skyebellasario

                    Fred this has to be one of your best pieces! It is breathtaking

                    • FredPeyer

                      Thanks Skye! Two making me blush comments in a row! I will need a bigger hat soon. Very much appreciated!



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