Light On.

Goldfinch60

Light On

By Goldfinch

 

Once more I stir,

Always knowing that I would come through.

A steady rising

Pulling me up to my new life.

Facing all around me

Those boundaries no longer existent,

The lightness pulling me up,

Standing my ground with my strength,

Mended I go forward.

 

Engulfed by the purity of light,

High into the beautiful world,

Into the heights of wonder.

 

Light on; always there,

Light on; never failing,

Light on; within my life.

 

Here is the rise,

Always going to be there in my mind,

Growing at its own pace,

Slowly giving me sure footing.

As I rise towards the light.

My life growing into wonder,

Lifting me to the heights.

I ran faster and faster, free from pain.

Mended, I was with the light.

 

Rising, straightening, in control,

Flattening, flying,

Upright, forthright,

Climbing, pulling.

Ever upward, higher and higher,

There is no top,

Nothing to stop me,

Nothing to stop me reach my heights

 

Opened by the light of life,

Higher into the glory beyond,

Into the arms of My Spirit.

 

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Blackout 

By Hood

 

Here comes the collapse

Never knew it was coming until it was too late

It was so fast & hard

The strike took me clean off my feet

Smacked the ground face first

Then my boundaries came tumbling down

Rubble rained down on me

I tried to stand but the weight was too heavy

Broken; I curled into a ball

 

Engulfed by the relentless darkness

Deep into the void beyond the abyss

Into the arms of unconsciousness

 

Blackout; no warning

Blackout; no control

Blackout; consume me whole

 

Here comes the collapse

Never knew it was coming until it was too late

It was so quick & harsh

The impact knocked me off my feet

Face first I smacked the ground

Then my defences began to cave in

Burying me in a pile of stone

I tried to crawl but the pain was too intense

Broken; I curled into a ball

 

Falling, spiralling, out of control

Twisting, tumbling

Upside down, inside out

Plunging, plummeting

Descending, down, deeper & deeper

There is no bottom

Nothing to break this fall

Nothing, nothing below me at all

 

Engulfed by the relentless darkness

Deep into the void beyond the abyss

Into the arms of unconsciousness

 

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 16th, 2017 02:32
  • Comment from author about the poem: When I comment on poems from Hood I always see light from his dark and we have had conversations about this, when Hood wrote his poem 'Blackout' I took it a stage further and wrote a poem copying his style if the poem but reversed the meaning. Hood has agreed that I can post this poem, his is below mine. Be warned - there may be combined poems with Hood and Goldie to come.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 45
  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻
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  • orchidee

    Good write Gold/Hood. Hmm, light and dark? I don't go along much with the thought of there having to be darkness, for the light to shine. Except in the darkness, the nothingness of my mind, when I have an 'idea' and a light bulb comes on! Ping! Too much thinking, too many ideas - is it dangerous? heehee.

    • Goldfinch60

      Darkness is there Orchi but we have the light in our lives to show us the way.

    • Michael Edwards

      What a great mirror on Hood's excellent write - a super idea and a super poem Andy and look forward to more.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Michael, that mirror is always there.

      • Laura🌻

        Goldie,
        Looking forward to future combined poems between you and Hood!
        This was indeed a formidable write...
        White on Black...
        Yin and Yang...
        an interconnected duality!
        Bravo! Enjoyed the read!
        Great idea!
        A definite save and fave!

        ~Laura~

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Laura, you are most kind.



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