Light in Death.

Goldfinch60



I travel through the ether

Bringing light to all.

The darkest of moments I see

And their sadness comes to me,

But that sadness is dispelled

With the brightness

I bring into their lives.

I see people when they are so low,

Contemplating death,

That final blow to their lives,

But I reassure them

And switch on a light

For them to follow,

To follow out of their darkness,

But they should know

That even if their body dies

I will be with them,

The Spirit of Life

Goes on for Eternity.

 

That even in death,

There will be light.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 18th, 2017 03:20
  • Comment from author about the poem: This came to me after I had read and commented on Hood's poem '"Attention". In my comment I said "Even in the darkness you found pain and that pain caused you to survive so maybe in your darkened thoughts the light was switched on by somebody, maybe it was an ethereal me." That Idea of an 'ethereal me' made me think and this poem was the result.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 53
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Laura🌻.
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Comments8

  • orchidee

    A fine and encouraging write Gold. 'Dark writes' may not be our genre, and we can pick and choose what to read. Yet we know it helps folk to write what is on their minds, whether it's their usual genre or not.

  • Michael Edwards

    It's an honour not appreciated by many to give support to others in their darkest hours - fine work Andy.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Michael, all we can do is try our best.

    • Accidental Poet

      Let that light forever shine brightly upon the darkest of souls. Great poem Andy.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you AP, I will do my best.

      • Hoopie

        My favorite of your writes so far man

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you NR, glad that you liked it.

        • Louis Gibbs

          "In death, there will be light", nails it, Goldie! Fine poem.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Louis, most kind.

          • Louis Gibbs

            "In death, there will be light", nails it, Goldie! Fine poem.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Louis.

            • Christina8

              Bravo! Great job on this one, GF! I am a true believer in your last two lines. It's great to have you on this site as an encourager and a bright light to all!

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Christine, you are so kind.

              • Laura🌻

                Goldie,
                Wow! This is so powerful! At our darkest moments, this is the poem (your words) to be remembered and recited like a prayer! A definite favorite I shall save!
                ~Laura~

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you so much for your wonderful comments Laura.



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