THE MAN I KNEW

Louis Gibbs

A strange one

Was he.

 

From his eyes

Poured a captivating

Blend of kindness and sorrow

Along with an abundance

Of great wisdom.

 

Yet

 

One knew

Instinctively this

Was a man who is

Not to be trifled with,

As soon realized by

Money changers

In the temple.

 

Indeed,

He was one

Hell-of-a-man!

I miss him terribly.

 

  • Author: Louis Gibbs (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 21st, 2017 00:00
  • Comment from author about the poem: A tribute, for his upcoming birthday.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 41
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  • Goldfinch60

    Good write and tribute.

    • Louis Gibbs

      Thank you, Goldie.

    • Michael Edwards

      Written with reel feeling - great work Louis

      • Louis Gibbs

        Much appreciated, Michael!

      • orchidee

        A fine write Louis. Yet we know it didn't end with His death - as some films portray Him. Doh! They've missed out the 'ending'.

        • Louis Gibbs

          Right ... death is just another beginning, isn't it. Thanks, 'O'!

        • FredPeyer

          Louis, this poem is incredible! Love the idea, the words, the structure!
          You are one Hell-of-a-poet!

          • Louis Gibbs

            I am honored and flattered, my friend. Blessings to you and yours on Christmas and all year long, Fred.

          • Renzi

            😢 i feel this 💓 beautifullly written my friend.

            • Louis Gibbs

              Much appreciated, dear Renzi!

            • Kadesh Vega

              😮 wonderful!

              • Louis Gibbs

                Thank you so much for your kind appraisal, Kadesh.



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