Each
Day
Our life
Increases,
Increases in time
Increases in the joy of it.
Our lives always move on, move on to eternity,
To eternity and beyond,
Always within us,
Infinite,
At one
With
All
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 4th, 2018 02:43
- Comment from author about the poem: This is written a a Fibonacci sequence and reverse Fibonacci sequence (Add the number of syllables of the two previous lines to create the syllable count for the next line - 1,1,2,3,5,8,13.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments7
Yes we are both at it today with these structured forms - great work Andy.
Thanks Michael.
Good write Gold. This could become enormous if it was any longer - 34, 55,89,....! I'm always fussing about syllables though!
It can get out of hand sometimes, I run out of fingers and toes.
Wonderfully inspiting words Goldi and I love the form used.
Thank you Fay, much appreciated.
How you can actually get a great message into this mathematical poem is beyond me.
Great job, Goldfinch!
Thank you Fred, you are so kind.
I have been writing FIBS for many years but put very few up, it does come as a surprise to people to see me write in a different way.
Poetry math ... that’s cool 😎 good job
Great write
Ah, another fabulous display of shaped poetry, Goldie. Seems to be the theme of the day. Well done in tackling the Fibonacci sequence poetically!
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