Eternity Calls - FIB,

Goldfinch60

Each

Day

Our life

Increases,

Increases in time

Increases in the joy of it.

Our lives always move on, move on to eternity,

To eternity and beyond,

Always within us,

Infinite,

At one

With

All

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 4th, 2018 02:43
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is written a a Fibonacci sequence and reverse Fibonacci sequence (Add the number of syllables of the two previous lines to create the syllable count for the next line - 1,1,2,3,5,8,13.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 20
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Comments7

  • Michael Edwards

    Yes we are both at it today with these structured forms - great work Andy.

  • orchidee

    Good write Gold. This could become enormous if it was any longer - 34, 55,89,....! I'm always fussing about syllables though!

    • Goldfinch60

      It can get out of hand sometimes, I run out of fingers and toes.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Wonderfully inspiting words Goldi and I love the form used.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Fay, much appreciated.

      • FredPeyer

        How you can actually get a great message into this mathematical poem is beyond me.
        Great job, Goldfinch!

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Fred, you are so kind.

          I have been writing FIBS for many years but put very few up, it does come as a surprise to people to see me write in a different way.

        • WL Schuett

          Poetry math ... that’s cool 😎 good job

        • Tony36

          Great write

        • Louis Gibbs

          Ah, another fabulous display of shaped poetry, Goldie. Seems to be the theme of the day. Well done in tackling the Fibonacci sequence poetically!



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