In the silence of my being
I hear the beating of your heart
Hear you faintly whisper
‘we will never part’
In the depth of my emotions
Exists that very special place
A promise for the two of us
To love, kiss and embrace
In the clutter of my mind
There is a memory of you
Where I can see and feel it
And quietly listen too
You are everywhere I look
Fill body, heart and soul
You took a broken me
And made me whole
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Author:
Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 10th, 2018 01:06
- Category: Love
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Comments6
Not sure that I was ever broken but my wife is there, everywhere, for me and made me whole - super work Fred
Wow, that was fast, Michael! I think that we are made 'more whole' by our loves even if we are not broken. Thank you for your comment!
Superb write, my wife was always there for me and we became one, as it should be.
Thank you Goldfinch! That is such a loving statement. Hope you know how much I admire you!
Good write Fred, and not a swoon in sight from me! So this is not too 'hot' for me. lol.
Thanks orchidee. I knew you could relate to this one.
Amazing how a good woman can make a broken man whole. Ya gotta love em! Well written, Fred!
Thank you Louis, and it can go the other way too. There is no gender bias here. 🙂
Just read that one out loud and cried healing tears, you the man 😉
Thanks PS, don't know what to say.
ah, the softened touch of romance together heart to heart and all those wonderful beautiful feelings that come along with it. penned perfectly here, Fred, the message is clear and fluently posed for a great poem. Keep on loving, my friend.
Thanks Kevin! Despite the daily grind, the beautiful feelings are still there.
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