Thought it stopped but it came straight back

Poetic Dan

It's finally ended but for how long?
This is the longest it's ever rang
Past seven days was last tag on my chat

I've been told through my days
Tinnitus is what rings in my head
Sometimes low, mostly high tone
I've had this for most of my adult life

So long randomly coming on and off
Till the mental note it's worse in negative thought
When stuck in improving others worlds before my own
Thinking if only I could help them see what I see

My mistakes are mine to see
In the worlds response to me
Love ones are a reflection of this
For no emotion is a greater gift

To be held in someones arms
Knowing no judgement will be fall
A moment of shared breath within
Giving recharge to true love again

This giving we all give
Positive or negative
Conscious or unconscious
Is what I always see

As that is life to me
Precious as can be
Forever expanding
My new reality to see

So I'm trying get back on track
Of watching from my world view
As there are all ways more to improve
For our own soul needs to grow
Helping plants the seeds of hope

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 10th, 2018 18:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just thought I'd see if this would helped me. Sorry if it's hard to read but I thank you if stuck with it.
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  • Goldfinch60

    May your hope soon grow into reality, good emotive write.

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you buddy, my hope is this dam ringing would stop too.

    • Resa71

      Not hard to read at all 🙂 Beautifully hopeful!

      • Poetic Dan

        That is good to hear thank you so much for the feed back.

      • FredPeyer

        Sorry to disappoint you, PD, but the ringing won't stop. Had it for years, but am ignoring it most of the time.
        Beautiful poem, you are on the right way!

        • Poetic Dan

          I hope so my friend, it has calm down a bit from writing this and going with the flow as I feel it's worse when I go against it.

        • Caring dove

          nice wording throughout this .. soryr to hear of yoru tinnitus , do you know what causes it .. hope it leaves for you soon . . good piece of writing here



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