They start to gather unnecessarily, due to a broken budget,
Made by the suits who are becoming broken themselves,
For they are mortal and cannot help their vulnerabilities,
But due to no replenishment, they stew in their disease.
In desperate thin tones, they’ll start their ardent chanting,
To keep their precious lives, still rolling in zealous motion,
Their audience is just but one man, a certain Mr. Hunt,
Who himself is susceptible to these bio-chemical shunts.
Another chorus joins them, but they are standing by their beds,
Victims of slander, labelled greedy, for they are the doctors,
Groaning and defensive talk continues towards this minister,
In hope, he doesn’t continue his conduct, so stale and sinister.
The numbers endure their growth, chants turn into screams,
A miracle for dear NHS should be for them in reach,
Jeremy, though disliked by many, you could be a true friend,
Instead of numbers, call them family, so you can start their mend.
There should be no naivety, about humans and their deaths,
But for them, the gift of time should be enjoyed in many breaths,
For the exhausted doctor who practises, and the patient that coughs,
Please for them, I suggest the House, stop acting like pigs at troughs.
These corridors, like sardine cans, are filled up to the brim,
Containing a song so sour, and made up of all things grim,
Doctored plans leave doctors pained, patients wait patiently,
But, for now what should be given to them, is locked up in solitary.
- Author: AuburnScribbler ( Offline)
- Published: January 14th, 2018 11:53
- Comment from author about the poem: The NHS in the UK, is currently going through a rough patch, with the general budget not providing the right equipment for doctors, therefore patients who need proper treatment are not receiving it. It has got so out of hand, that certain operations have been delayed and some hospitals are overfilling, meaning that "corridors" have become new wards. I appreciate that compiling the general budget is a very stressful and intricate science, which is performed by both the Chancellor of the Exchequer and the Minister of Health, but the people's health should be a priority and we shouldn't really be asking and asking again for certain improvements to be made. Therefore "The Choir in the Corridor" is a cry for help to a certain minister, to be less obtuse in his dealings and be more judicious in his choices. I really do hope this gets better and I hope you enjoy.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 28
Comments3
A powerful write so well expressed and yet to have an NHS is still a blessing for all it's shortfalls and shortfalls in funding.
Great write
Very good write and very true. Now she gives Hunt even more power by being responsible for social care, what does he know about it!!
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