HEY WAITER THERE'S A .....

Michael Edwards

 

HEY WAITER THERE’S A ….

 

The fly was caught in love’s sweet loop

with its heart in the clouds

and its feet in the soup.

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 15th, 2018 00:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: It's a short light verse day today.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 37
  • Users favorite of this poem: pots-and-pans
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  • orchidee

    Oh lol. Was it swimming in the soup?!

    • Michael Edwards

      No - it was dumping some rubbish - it's a fly-tipper.

      • Accidental Poet

        orchi, he's waiting for you to come join him.

      • FredPeyer

        Forget about the fly, Michael, you are talking about us!

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks for sharing MICHAEL ~ It's happened to me ~ more than once ! Love the visual "Night traffic ~ in the SNOW" Yours BRIAN

        • Michael Edwards

          Thanks Brian - yes could be traffic .

        • pots-and-pans

          Wow, that was quite unexpected! Simple, yet... elegant? I liked it.

          • Michael Edwards

            Cheers p&p - pleased you liked it.

          • Jooles

            😂🤣

          • Mottakeenur Rehman

            As your language its a little gem sir!

            • Michael Edwards

              Just a bit of light verse - I'm running out of serious pieces - must get the pen going - thanks so much M



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