PATIENTLY LORD ~ I pray to You
Show me what You would have me do
Open my Eyes ~ to see as you
SPIRIT DIVINE !
OPEN my EYES ~ that I may see
The Pathway of Faith ~ You've planned for me
OPEN my EARS ~ that I may hear
Your guiding words fall on my ear
OPEN my MOUTH and let me speak
The WORD of GOD to those who seek
OPEN my MIND to understand
The Life of Faith ~ that You have planned
SILENTLY now I wait for YOU
O help me LORD to see life through
OPEN my HEART to Worship You
SPIRIT DIVINE !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN
This poem is based on a much longer hymn ~
written at the beginning of the last century !
- Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: January 21st, 2018 03:59
- Category: Spiritual
- Views: 31
Comments7
That was very pleasant and a very good prayer.
Thanks FRIEND ~ pleased you enjoyed it ! BRIAN
Lovely poem, hymn, prayer Brian.
What is the hymn title? I thought of 'God be in my head' but that's from 1514 - very old, so I probably knew that one! My age - about 500 years old! lol.
THE FIRST LINE IS "Open my eyes that I may see ~ glimpses of truth thou hast for me" ~ etc The language is beautiful almost Elizabethan ~ my paraphrases tend to be Modern English ! BRIAN
Thanks Brian. Oh I don't know it - the hymn. From 1895 I read. To an Irregular Metre, so it's difficult for me to turn it into a hymn-poem!
Awesome Sunday prayer! Sister Christina
Thanks CHRIS ~ pleased you liked it ~ Prayer is so so important ~ as you know ~ Sacred Hugs ~ BROTHER BRIAN @@@@@@@
Beautiful prayer. May you receive generously the good promises from our Father of Lights.
Thanks HEATHER ~ My experience is that our FATHER GOD ~ hears and answers all our prayers ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
WE are all awaiting Our Lords return Brain. Good write.
When CHRIST shall come resplendent in |His Glory ~ To take me Home ~ What Joy shall then be mine ......................... ! AMEN ANDY ~ What a Glorious Day ~ That will be ! BRIAN
I am sure you will get what you pray for, Brian! Well written, well structured! Kudos!
Thanks FRED ~ My Spiritual Experience has always been
ASK and you will Receive
SEEK and you will Find
KNOCK and it will be Opened for you
Thanks for your comment ~ BRIAN
That's so helpful. You know, for inspiration. I LOVE IT!!! 🙂
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