a thousand words
between each line
a thousand days
one wisp in time
a touch, a kiss
a well placed rhyme
will you miss me
when I'm gone
a thousand tears
that burned my face
a thousand sighs
that met each grace
a life that leaves
a fragrant space
I will miss you
when you're gone
ten thousand years
to write upon
ten thousand lights
without the sun
I smell your hair
and I'm undone
just dream, love
I'm right here
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Author:
Heather T (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This was written in the same emotional context as "mortal", hence the similarities. I will likely and eventually explore this more.
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Comments5
Very beautiful and poignant.
Thank you for kind comments, sr. Much appreciated.
Hood said it perfectly, all I can add is that I love your writing. Superbly done!
I'm so glad you do! It means much. Thank you, thank you!
Along with the others you can count me as a fan of yours - great work Heather
I receive that, friend. I need all I can get! Thank you so much.
lovely
Beautifully emotive write.
Humble thanks, GF.
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