You are not mine but I am yours
This is as real as the moon or stars
Life has given me the chance to be more
With surrendering my whole life for yours
Inspiring me to inspire you
Letting mistakes guide us through
To let you vent and lose all control
Knowing you'll never go without love
For we could be other sides of this world
My thoughts always being in the sky above
I am all the truth that I can possibly be
Wanting nothing more than I can see
You belong to everyone not just me
I'm just the lucky one to set you free
So let go of fear my child never give up
As you were made to fly above it all
Never to forget that I'm here if you fall
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Another beautiful weekend with my kids, my daughter jokingly said the first line. I've not been able to get it out of my mind, so now I try to write through the emotions ;)
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Comments6
This is so beautiful, Dan!
I’m so happy for you that you spent the weekend with your children! I know that made you ecstatic! I do love the first line. Such beautiful words...especially for a dad to hear!
A beautiful poem! I will definitely save as my favorite...and share it with my children! I could never write it as beautifully as you have!
Awesome job my friend!
All the best...
~Laura~
I'm sure you could my friend but if not then I know you show it.
I am blessed to have the pain of saying good bye... I think could be another writing, dam here comes the tears of joy again.
Thank you so much for your kind words my friend
Always my friend!
Btw...super visual!
What a superb piece and those last two lines are jnspirational
Thank you kindly my friend, I truly hope they do.
A true treasure for your children to keep Dan - - your pen excels in expressing the love good parents give to growing offspring and which will go on throughout life - I love that last line and thanks for sharing your blessed weekend.
Thank you for the loving comment, I hope to stand by my every word.
Another great write Dan. Sometimes kids can say the most profound things that really make adults listen.
That they can my friend, that they can. Thank you for the up lifting comment
This was a beautiful and meaningful write, Dan. You've always been an expert at crafting emotional pieces that truly express what you feel, but this one shines even amongst the gold.
Your comment has made my day, as you know what is like to shine more than gold.
It is our soul my friend
Very good write, children can say the most wonderful things and show their love for you.
You have an Angel in your life Dan.
That I do my friend and treasure every moment of it. Even when they feel so far away
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