Here if you fall

Poetic Dan

You are not mine but I am yours
This is as real as the moon or stars

Life has given me the chance to be more
With surrendering my whole life for yours

Inspiring me to inspire you
Letting mistakes guide us through

To let you vent and lose all control
Knowing you'll never go without love

For we could be other sides of this world
My thoughts always being in the sky above

I am all the truth that I can possibly be
Wanting nothing more than I can see

You belong to everyone not just me
I'm just the lucky one to set you free

So let go of fear my child never give up
As you were made to fly above it all
Never to forget that I'm here if you fall

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 22nd, 2018 10:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: Another beautiful weekend with my kids, my daughter jokingly said the first line. I've not been able to get it out of my mind, so now I try to write through the emotions ;)
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  • Views: 26
  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻, poetboy123
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  • Laura🌻

    This is so beautiful, Dan!
    I’m so happy for you that you spent the weekend with your children! I know that made you ecstatic! I do love the first line. Such beautiful words...especially for a dad to hear!

    A beautiful poem! I will definitely save as my favorite...and share it with my children! I could never write it as beautifully as you have!

    Awesome job my friend!

    All the best...
    ~Laura~

    • Poetic Dan

      I'm sure you could my friend but if not then I know you show it.

      I am blessed to have the pain of saying good bye... I think could be another writing, dam here comes the tears of joy again.
      Thank you so much for your kind words my friend

      • Laura🌻

        Always my friend!
        Btw...super visual!

      • Michael Edwards

        What a superb piece and those last two lines are jnspirational

        • Poetic Dan

          Thank you kindly my friend, I truly hope they do.

        • Fay Slimm.

          A true treasure for your children to keep Dan - - your pen excels in expressing the love good parents give to growing offspring and which will go on throughout life - I love that last line and thanks for sharing your blessed weekend.

          • Poetic Dan

            Thank you for the loving comment, I hope to stand by my every word.

          • Accidental Poet

            Another great write Dan. Sometimes kids can say the most profound things that really make adults listen.

            • Poetic Dan

              That they can my friend, that they can. Thank you for the up lifting comment

            • poetboy123

              This was a beautiful and meaningful write, Dan. You've always been an expert at crafting emotional pieces that truly express what you feel, but this one shines even amongst the gold.

              • Poetic Dan

                Your comment has made my day, as you know what is like to shine more than gold.
                It is our soul my friend

              • Goldfinch60

                Very good write, children can say the most wonderful things and show their love for you.
                You have an Angel in your life Dan.

                • Poetic Dan

                  That I do my friend and treasure every moment of it. Even when they feel so far away



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