(c) 2018 Edward York
She stared ahead in silence,
After waiting for so long.
She wanted it to be perfect,
And even played their song.
She had worn his favorite perfume,
Her eyes a golden brown.
She had poured her shapely body,
Inside a long red gown.
The front dipped down much lower,
And framed her cleavage well.
The excitement of the moment,
Had made her nipples swell.
It was his eyes that finally told her,
It was clear he wanted more.
Anticipation made her tremble,
As the gown fell to the floor.
He picked her up and held her,
Not a word was ever said.
The candles lit a pathway,
As he carried her to bed.
Her naked body like a present,
bathed in candle light.
The warmth clouded his senses,
And lasted through the night.
The morning found them sleeping,
Her head upon his chest.
His words always said "I love you",
But his actions said it best.
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Author:
lasergraph (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Valentine's day is approaching so I wrote this in tribute of that. There will be others no doubt.
- Category: Love
- Views: 65
- User favorite of this poem: Laura🌻.
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Comments7
A fine romantic write Edward.
I am a romantic at heart, I think most poets are.
Wonderful write
I appreciate you reading it.
Welcome
Good write laser. Swoon! lol.
It was my Hallmark moment. OK, you won't see that on Hallmark.
Laser,
Absolutely delightful!
Enjoyed the entire poem!
I especially liked the lines...
“She had poured her shapely body,
Inside a long red gown.”
I like the visual very much!
Very creatively executed!
~Laura~
Thank you, I kind of have a thing for long red gowns.
Wow - so romantic - -a charming read Laser along with the wonderful visual.
Glad you could visualize. It is a reaffirmation that I may be old, but I am not dead.
Such a romantic, beautiful poem
Thank you. I believe it has different meanings for everyone, depending on your own experience.
Lasergraph, love the whole poem, but especially the last stanza! Words are nice, but it is what you do that counts!
Actions speak louder than words, and my words were shouting. Talk is cheap but actions cost little more.
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