nihility

November

September 5, 2015

The rain is too humid
and the grass is too dirty
maybe you'd understand
if I told you I was born in fall
and the leaves have fallen
just like pieces of my heart
And it gets a little cold
but not too cold
just like the hole in my soul

 

Comments4

  • SorrowfullyHappy

    great first poem keep up the great work

  • ReloadTheWorld

    Nice job!

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME LESLIE ~ Thanks for your first POEM ~ I am a SEPTEMBER BABY ~ between Harvest & Fall ~ so i can empathise "The Autumn Leaves go bey my Window too ........ !" and now it's WINTER ~ but in the UK there are already signs of Spring (Snowdrops etc) so whatever Season we were born in ~ we can enjoy the one we're living in ~ OK Thinking of you ~ Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my SITE ~ B !

  • nihility

    Side note: if I put a date on at the top of the poem it’s the date I wrote it on.



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