I need you so badly
Can’t wait to taste you
Stripping you of
Your outer layers
To lose myself
In your sweetness
You melt in my hands
Excite my senses
Satisfy my desires
Still my hunger
You truly are
A gift of the Gods
I dream of you every day
See you in all your glory
Imagine your velvety skin
Life without you…
Unbearable hardship
Heartfelt longing
I love my chocolate bar!
- Author: Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: January 27th, 2018 00:54
- Category: Love
- Views: 42
- Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
Comments8
Smashing twist Fred, enjoy your bar.
Thanks Goldie, have to have one at least once per week!
My weakness - thanks for the early morning laugh Fred - I guess you have gone to bed as I type this - hope you didn't eat the whole bar.
Thanks Michael, yes, I slept through your typing, and yes, I always eat the whole bar. No fun otherwise! Or maybe I just don't have the willpower to keep some for later.
Good write Fred. if I ate choccie late at night it would keep me awake.
Thanks Orchi! I can drink coffee, even an espresso, just before going to bed, can eat chocolate too, and have no problem at all falling asleep. I guess I am just lucky that way!
You needing me too?! heehee.
Chocolate IS a food group. Thanks for this great tasty treat Fred.
Thanks AP, right your are!!!!
I had a feeling!!!!! It was the first thing in my mind which goes to show...........
Thanks sr! Great minds think alike!
the taste of this poem is so sweet and full of chocolate. love the twist.
Thanks Kevin, as a Swiss how could I not love chocolate! Read somewhere that average annual consumption of chocolate per head is something like 20 lbs in Switzerland, and 10 lbs in the USA.
that's hard to believe but I believe you, Fred, and I'm type 1 diabetic so lots of scoffing chocolates is a no-no for me. one mars bar maybe two a day is plenty as long as I eat good food.
There is sugar-free chocolate, or eat 70% or 80% dark chocolate which no or very little sugar.
Ha ha - now that had me fooled - - a yummy read Fred.
Thanks Fay, maybe you don't eat enough chocolate! 🙂
Loved this Fred! Hilarious twist 🙂
Thanks skye! Not every poem can be serious, we have to have some fun too!
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