Sexy you are my beautiful queen
An hourglass figure you do possess
Cloaked in a shimmering silver sheen
You are a regal sight I must confess!
There’s a void within you?
Come hither you command
Enticing me to fill that void
I am compelled to answer your demand!
I am ready to inhabit your sacred chamber
Yes, my queen, I am your bait
I am ready to fill that empty space
I am ready to embrace my fate!
My shimmering queen
You are my urn
You are the prize
For whom I burn!
With my precious dust your void is filled!
Once the obsequies are complete
On the Royal Mantle we will sit.
Oh queen of mine, we’re finally asleep!
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Great read Laura
Thank you for the read
and comment, Michael!
It took me a while to write
this one. Very painful
and difficult...but I needed to!
~Laura~
GRAZIE LAURA ~ UNA BELLA POEMA
D'AMORE FRUSTRADO ? I can understand why it was painful to write ! The ANGST of unavailable LOVE is the worst of all ANGSTS Baci e Abbracci e Amore per Tu SOLO ~ BRIAN XOXOX
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN...
Grazie!
Veramente è stato lui il
FRUSTRATO!
This was a difficult write because I wasn’t able to help him!
I felt his frustration! I felt
his pain! I hope he’s at
peace now! I cannot dwell
on his passing! It has
become unhealthy! I was
sinking in a deep depression!
So unhealthy for me and
my family! I must move on
and live in the now!
Un Abbraccio e Baci ...
~Laura~
Very good write Laura.
Alex,
Thank you for the read,
the comment, and the
save as a favorite!
~Laura~
Lawless,
Your read and your comments are very much appreciated!! Thank you for the save as your favorite!
The pain is subsidizing!
~Laura~
Very well written, Laura!
'I am your bait' made me thing that hopefully she is not fishing, otherwise I would be a worm!
Fred,
I appreciate your read
and comments! Thank you!
On a lighter note, believe me, you wouldn’t want to beTHAT WORM!!! There’s much more that meets the eye in that writing!
~Laura~
My immediate thought was of a male bee, willing to sacrifice himself for the one to be with the Queen bee.
And then I read your replies and the reason for this poem
whether lost, or otherwise unobtainable & for whatever reason, it is going to hurt...
I did enjoy this poem Laura, so why do I feel as though I should be apologising...... Neville
Interesting and insightful comments!
Curious to know, if you care to share,...
“Why do you feel as though” you “should be apologizing”?
maybe for enjoying a sad poem, presumably based on someones experience of sadness and consternation......
Neville
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