Fay Slimm.

Alltogetherness.

 

 

Alltogetherness.

 

Who inhabits Faith's wisely sought kingdom

rides wild ideas fraught with rabid surprises,  

straddles fierce fencing by calm's continuum,

and disarms with caution obstreperous minds   

  believing Love's throne alltogetherness brings.    

 

 

 

 

 

Comments7

  • Lorna

    Fay - I'm not religious but I believe in Love! (Nature is god to me.....)

    • Fay Slimm.

      Love is indeed the crux of all traits Lorna and nature is full of its spirit - so good to know your thoughts on the read.

    • Accidental Poet

      Altogether beautifully written Fay.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Thank you sincerely A.P.

      • Michael Edwards

        Yes indeed - subtle reflections enjoyed Fay.

        • Fay Slimm.

          Small yet concise the lines wrote themselves almost Michael.

        • Laura🌻

          Much to reflect upon,
          dear Fay!
          Thank you for this
          thought provoking
          beautiful share!
          ~Laura~

          • Fay Slimm.

            Your thanks are taken with humble welcome dear Laura and pleased that your read of these deeper thoughts brought you much on which to reflect - - you will agree that love is the throne before which humans must kneel - - I am so pleased with your encouraging comment.

          • orchidee

            A fine write Fay.

            • Fay Slimm.

              Grateful for both your visit and comment dear Orchi.

            • FredPeyer

              The answer to the 'who?' is quite simple: It is YOU Fay!!!
              How else could you write so beautifully?

              • Fay Slimm.

                Ah - your comment fills me with blushes Fred - such as I can only dream of belonging completely to that first line - - thank you however - - we can all but try to raise the level of love in our lives Your warm heart always shows through both your comments and poems my friend.

                • FredPeyer

                  Well, while I am not the religious kind, I do know that it says in the Bible that you are made in the image of God, and that God resides inside you. So there you go, no matter how you look at it, it is still YOU in that first line! 🙂

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  YES INDEED ~ Great thoughts to enrich he mind as we enter the Sabbath (It's 9pm in the EAST !) Believing in the LOVE that flows daily from the Throne of GOD ~ breaks down all barriers and produces ALLTOGETHERNESS ~ AMEN ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN Love the visual ~ The Shekinah Glory of the juxtaposition of the WORD of GOD and the Throne of GOD ~ AMEN !

                  • Fay Slimm.

                    Yes and Amen to these words of comment dear Brian - - - so pleased you enjoyed both the picture and verse.



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