Your breath against my skin
the events about to transpire
it just got really hot in here
'cause I came too close to your fire
Desperate for your affections
and your midnight desires
Just sitting here close to you
My wanton body perspires
Our bodies fit like a mold
made for only us two
Lovers that can share this
are reserved only for a few
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 6th, 2018 07:45
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HOT CHRIS and very SENSUAL ~ It must be LOVE because that is exactly how ANGELA & I feel ~when we get too close ~ AMEN ~ Abrazos Hermanos ~ BRIAN (In the cold shower !) @@@@@@@
Thanks Brian! Appreciate the great feedback! Abrazos Hermanas
Good loving, sensual write.
Thanks GF! I do appreciate it very much!
Lovely piece of writing.
Michael 🙂
Thank you so much Poetic25! I really appreciate it!
“A mold made for us two” this is very intimate an speaks volume about how close two can be with such few words. Thank you for sharing
Thanks so much hulheart! Yes, that was one of my favorite parts. I appreciate your feedback!
Your beautiful words perfectly conjure up the image of two people who love one another intensely!
Love this line...
“Just sitting here close to you...”
A mere touch will ignite that fire within! An exquisite write, Christina!
~Laura~
Thanks so much Laura! I really appreciate it!
Yes, you are in love, Christina, no doubt about it after reading this beautiful and 'hot' poem filled with fiery breath, perspiring bodies and custom made molds!
You got it, Fred! Thanks so much for your reply. I appreciate it!
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