The shape of loneliness

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  BRIAN & ANGELA February 6th, 2018 16:44

  "Me and my Shadow ~ walking down the avenue
  Me and my Shadow ~ All alone and feelin' blue
  And when it's twelve o'clock ~ we climb the stair
  We never knock 'cos nobodies there .......
  
  Thanks for sharing M & M ~ why such a melancholy POEM ? You write such sad poems ~ it made me sad for you ! Not cold or hot ~ the temperature of loneliness UNDETECTABLE ~ The color of loneliness ~ UNDEFINABLE ~ The shape of loneliness ~ UNDRAWABLE ~ OMG M & M you really must be lonely ~ no state for a lovely Lady ~ like YOU ! I'm thinkin' of you ~ hope that helps ~ Yours as ever ~ Your MPS Friend BRIAN (UK)

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    myself and meFebruary 7th, 2018 08:16

    Your friendship and support mean a lot to me. Thank you for stopping by.

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  Christina8 February 6th, 2018 19:16

  This was a great poem, M&M! I hope you find the love that's right for you soon, but as for this poem, it was awesome!

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    myself and meFebruary 7th, 2018 08:17

    Thank you Christina, long time no see.

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  Accidental Poet February 6th, 2018 19:31

  Loneliness wears many hats and shows itself in many ways. And it touches everyone sooner or later in one way or another. Better days are coming m&m. Great write.

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    myself and meFebruary 7th, 2018 08:18

    Thanks AP. When the loneliness is hard for me to bear, I wrote it. Yes, everything will be fine soon.

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  Goldfinch60 February 7th, 2018 01:51

  That loneliness can be so debilitating but rest assured it can be endured and can lead to brighter days.
  Good emotive write.

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    myself and meFebruary 7th, 2018 08:32

    Loneliness feels like a sticky gum on the shoe, ugly and disturbing. Thank you for reading.

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  FredPeyer February 15th, 2018 16:08

  m&m, I am awed by the power of your poem, the way you use these metaphors of temperature, color, and drawing. So well done.
  And remember, m&m, loneliness is only a temporary affliction, soon to be replaced by joy and happiness!

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    myself and meFebruary 16th, 2018 08:28

    Thanks. FP.