She was sad
She was hurt
Audaciously hiding
Her broken heart
Behind a big smile
That never left her face
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Author:
Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 11th, 2018 00:31
- Category: Love
- Views: 47
- Users favorite of this poem: itslaurenbloss, Cass Fate, Laura🌻, myself and me
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Comments8
This is short but very powerful. I love it
Thank you Lauren! So nice of you to comment!
A gem of a write Fred - I'm a lover of shorties and this really nails it.
Thanks Michael, I know you are! I am learning from the best: You!
Very good write Fred and so very true of many.
Thanks Goldie! Just because somebody is smiling doesn't mean they are not hurting!
Good write Frank. I do tend to be long quite often - I waffle on! Why do I use 20 words when 5 may do?!
Thank you orchie! It is actually Fred and not Frank, but if you want to call me Frank that is OK too! So, why do you use 20 words instead of 5? Because you want to make sure we understand your intellectually challenging poems!
Oops sorry Frank - Fred! I don't mean them to be intellectually challenging - not cryptic so that no-one understands what I'm on about! Ohh, I just like to waffle sometimes, or I get carried away! lol
Oh my god Fred I love this! So powerful.
Thanks skye, I did have a strong woman in mind when writing this.
So true and so relatable, Fred! A very fine write! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
Thanks Laura, I think everybody wears a mask, at least some of the time.
Agree!
A great poem, so many have worn that hurt smile.
Thanks Christine! Sometimes all we can do is hide the real feelings.
I understand that pain is hard to deal with and a person can get use to the pain as well. It can be all day Act.
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