unprepared for you
there you were
for some reason
you see my reason
and you lift me
from the wreckage
in your arms
i live again
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dusk arising (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this as a piece had intended to place in a valentines card. I didn't get the opportunity but i think it holds so true for many relationships new or old.
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There is a book in this brief beauty. Sigh-worthy work!
There certainly is a story here yes. A recent chapter in my book of life.
Thank you for your kind comments
Good write, may your life continue in ts new love.
It wasn't to be i'm afraid. A close encounter but... the words i published on 13th say it all.
Holds true it sure does- a little diamond write.
Thanks Michael, much appreciated praise. I'm a great fan of the 'less is more' school of poetry and it really pleases me when i can come up with a worthwhile 'short'.
As you know I love shorties - they can be intriguing and can pack a great punch - this one is a sure winner.
Sounds like one of those encounters that turn the everyday grayness into color. A turning point in life, you say hello, you talk, you sit by the river, you age together... and you blink and it was all in your head; a ten minute life, imagined happiness before the color fades again. I get that a lot. 🙂 Enjoyable moments, why bother trying to make it real? Is there a difference between fantasy and a memory?
Like i said in my accompanying comment, this was meant to be written in a valentines card this year.... the relationship had ended by then but.....
I really like your take on this, you surely have a great poetic imagination. Thank you for commenting, it was a pleasure to read.
A gem of write which says much about coping and moving on.
Thank you fay.
these are beautiful words indeed...
Neville
Wow! out of the blue i'm taken back to why i wrote this. Intended for a valentine, never sent.
Thank you for bringing this back into my focus and thank you for your appreciation of it.
my pleasure and true, as was my brief review note.. have a great Sunday my friend... N
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