Maybe

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  Goldfinch60 February 16th, 2018 08:58

  Maybe?

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    myself and meFebruary 16th, 2018 09:03

    Yeah.

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  Bethany_megan February 16th, 2018 09:09

  There's a lot of emotion in this piece yet it has a monotone feel to it which contrasts the overall feelings and therefore emphasises the message that little bit more. Very affective. Absolutely love it, keep writing x

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    myself and meFebruary 17th, 2018 11:15

    Thank you for stopping by and reading.

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  Michael Edwards February 16th, 2018 11:37

  Love the construct of this - and maybe you were right !!

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    myself and meFebruary 17th, 2018 11:15

    Thanks ME. Maybe I was right about the wrong part.

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  Accidental Poet February 16th, 2018 11:50

  They say as one door closes, another door opens. Great write m&m.

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    myself and meFebruary 17th, 2018 11:19

    Thanks AP. It seems I knock the wrong door.

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    Accidental PoetFebruary 17th, 2018 18:36

    Persistence gets the gold ring m&m.

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  dusk arising February 16th, 2018 14:25

  Nice one, i like the way you constructed this. It's like a song to me in the way it develops.

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    myself and meFebruary 17th, 2018 11:20

    Thanks. D.A., Yeah, definitely a sad song.

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  Christina8 February 16th, 2018 14:29

  I like the way you wrote this. Very nicely done!

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    myself and meFebruary 17th, 2018 11:21

    Thanks. Christina for your nice words.

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  FredPeyer February 16th, 2018 22:52

  While the message is sad, I like the feel of the poem. You may have been wrong....but the poem is not!

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    myself and meFebruary 17th, 2018 11:22

    Thanks FP. The right poem for the sad wrongs.