Was that a gush of wind i heard
Bustling leaves tweeting birds
Was that your beating heart so strong
One last breath then you where gone
Was that a tear roll down your face
Or me just wishing i could take your place
On that bed surrounded by machines
Brings me doubts about what life really means
But we will meet again someday
When god will take my last breath away.
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nice first poem
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Welcome to MPS! A very emotion filled and well written poem! Thanks for sharing.
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WELCOME DIANE ~ Thanks for your first POEM ~ Very elegantly penned ~ but a very poignant subject. I have seen people die and their last breath is is like a great sigh of release and relief ~ as you describe it ! Love the final doublet because you express a hope of Eternal Life ! Blessed are those ~ who die knowing the LORD ~ AMEN Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
Thank you do much
Very good emotive write Diane, yes you WILL meet again.
Welcome to MPS.
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