The silence comes,
The silence goes,
But with each silence
The intensity
Becomes so loud.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 25th, 2018 02:52
- Comment from author about the poem: Shh. Listen.
- Category: Reflection
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A fine write Gold. Know what you mean. In so silent places, it can actually hurt one's ears.
Then - silence was shattered, cos I began to sing! lol.
Thank you Orchi.
You thank me for not singing?! I don't blame ya! heehee.
Sad, but true, Goldie! As time goes on the intensity will get louder and louder. But I know that your strength and your faith will overcome these louder and louder silences.
Thanks Fred, those silences can be wonderful.
And then we can truly think........... ahhhh peace.
Thank you Lorna.
I know you have the strength to overcome. I can recall my father telling me never to get drawn into pointless argument - in silence there is strength.
Silence can be wonderful.
Reminds me of when i was asked to stand quietly in a sound laboratory where they were testing the volume of noise generated by gas fires - after about twenty seconds the noise of blood pulsing through my ears was close to painful.
Silence reveals the missing. The missing shouts for attention.
Gold,
The more she is silent, the louder are her screams! She is extremely quiet, but her body movements communicate a different
message!
A relatable poignant write, my friend!
~Laura~
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